However, with the passage of time education system has completely changed with the help of advance technology.
you cannot put phrase which started by 'with' then irectly put 'verb' after that
the passage of time education system has completely changed with the help of advance technologyNowadays, every single parents wants to provide education either rich of poor.
correct it
Government providing funds for building schools and colleges for offering free education system to those children, who can not cannot study because of lack of money.
which tenses that you use?
pay more attention woth your structure and spelling, it seems easy, but it would be your big problem when you deal with the real test