you should read my entire post, because i haven't been able to underline all your mistakes. i think other mistakes might have slipped me, i'm not an expert, though.
Everyone considers that the job is a
very significant thing
in life. In my opinion jobs may be divided into three groups which are: higher income, convenience and interested jobs.
Nowadays, with the evolution of life, everybody is looking for jobs with a high salary. However,a high-paid job has many advantages and disadvantages. Most of jobs
which have a good salary require a long time to work, which you normally would spend with your family and friends. In addition, We can see only a small number of people who have this type of work stable in their lives. For example, My uncle Ali is a surgeon and his job makes him to spend a lot of time there and travel in order to accumulate experience. On the other hand, a high-paid job has many advantages, such as: we can build a bright future to our children and have a dream-house, which is one of most significant things we should all have it.
Or, Initially,there are two ways you can earn a high salary: by working a lot of time and by working little time. Most people who have these types of jobs spend a lot of time and they work hard, for example doctors. The doctors need to work and sometimes they stay one day without sleeping .Aso, doctors do not have free time to spend with her or his family and friends. On the other hand, high salary with short hours is very uniqe and you can not find it easaly.
In the second place, a convenient job includes a good salary, nice people, and location .unlike a high-paid job, a convenient job takes a short time and a good income. Also, the workplace is an important thing for every worker. This is because, daily, most of the time people spend at their workplace. During work, people interract with their co-workers. Moreover, Each and every person has some qualities and some of us can not interract with others. For example, When you work
Interesting jobs are very important because when you do somethings you like it , you will be more creative and get the a ability
first of all, your grammar is really poor. i would use this structure:
1st paragraph: nowadays a lot of people think that money is the most importat thing when looking for a job and others think that there are other things
2nd paragraph: talk about the need for money, what happens when people work just for money (they don't like their job, they're bored, no satisfaction, everything seems to be dull, etc.)
3rd paragraph: talk about other needs, co-workers, time spend, the environment, people's pleasure and satisfaction when they do what they like
4th paragraph: repeat what you said, there are people who can sacrifice their happiness for money and there are those who work just because they enjoy it and put heart in it.
this is just my opinion, i hope i helped you.