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Europe, America and Asia; The holiday of a lifetime


smudla95 1 / 1  
Jun 12, 2013   #1
Hi, can I request about correcting my essay?

The holiday of a liftetime
Last year I had a big chance to travel around the world with my friend as a honeymoon. The way took a hundred days, we tried every means of transport, saw a lot of different countries in Europa, America and Asia.

The worst experince that I have from the way was in Cuba.The political regime is really strict. I was shocked but I can a bit help to people, which live here. We gave them money and some food. On the other hand nature was beautiful. So clean and unspoiled from people.

When I was younger I wanted to go to Maldives always. Even though I can relaxed and live in a hotel. I didn't forget memories from Cuba, they were memorably.

The hundredth day I can turn back and realise that I helped to people, get to know new countries and their culture. It was a holiday I will never forget.

Thank you :-)
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jun 13, 2013   #2
Last year I had a big chance to travel around the world with my friend as a honeymoon .

.... honeymoon is referred to a vacation spent together by a newly wedded couple... is that what you are trying to say?
Last year I had a great opportunity to travel around the world with my friend.

The way took a hundred days, we tried every means of transport, saw a lot of different countries in Europa, America and Asia.

Our trip extended to hundred days and we tried all modes of transportation, explored many different countries in Europe, America and Asia.

The worst experince that Ihave from the way washad was in Cuba.The political regime is really strict. I was shocked but I cancouldn't do anythinga bit help to its people, which live here.


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