First and foremost, there is no denying thatsuch educational pattern has made it feasible for the children to form the basic knowledge as a firm background to have a good job.
... when you use the word "such" it refers to some idea which has been told to the reader previously. However, this is the first sentence of your body paragraph and generally a paragraph starts with a new idea. So I find this word is inappropriate to use in the at place.
For example, well-educated students tend to be applied for leading company rather than those who are not allocated any.
This sentence is pretty confusing due to its poor construction and organization. You need to re-write this to enhance its clarity.
Children are easily influenced by social factors and therefore the schools' responsibility for
adjustingmolding their attitudes
must be addressedto be more productive to society.