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'A doctor in a foreign country' - your long term goals (paragraph)


boyeboy 1 / -  
Mar 3, 2012   #1
My goals are to become a doctor in a foreign country and to become an individual who is exceptional in all subjects of learning. The International Baccalaureate can help me obtain this because to become a doctor that companies need across the county I need to graduate through a good university and the International Baccalaureate program would help me find
Jennyflower81 - / 690 96  
Mar 5, 2012   #2
My goals are to become a doctor in a foreign country and to become an individual who is exceptional in all subjects of learning. The International Baccalaureate can help me obtain this because to become a doctor that companies need across the county I need to graduate through a good university and the International Baccalaureate program would help me find

I can help you with this. When applying to a college, there are some things they are looking for when they read your essays. You are on the right track, and just need to build upon what you have written so far. Begin with a short description of why you are interested/passionate about your intended field of study. Then state your long term goal. Then, explain what short term goals you have to achieve (learning certain skills and education, on the job training), in order to make progress to your ultimate goal (doctor). Speak of how the degree program will be a stepping stone along your path to success. The school needs to know that you are a person with a plan, and that the school will give you the real-world skills to make your goal a reality.

Good luck in school!


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