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If you could disappear for a week, where would you go?
If I could disappear for a week . I would like to go to Italy, because why Because It's the most romantic place in the world. In Italy have a many places that I'm interested in for example Florence , Rome, Venice. First of all I'll fly all the way to Venice . Cities have been named to the most romantic one of the world. "City of the boat instead of car Canal instead of the road. I'll check in the best hotel here called Gritti Palace. In the night time I'll have a little of cocktail and go on a gondola boat to see all around the city. Next I'll never forget to see the art works from a famous artist of Italy Leonardo da Vinci , Michelangelo Buonarroti . oh ! I almost forget to visit 2 of the 7 wonders of the world Leaning Tower of Pisa and Colosseum. The last important thing here is shopping. I'll shopping at Milan and the Spanish Steps.
It'll be great time for me that have a chance to travel in Italy but I think a week isn't enough for me. I think a month will be fine to travel here.
If I could disappear for a week, I would like to go to Italy, because why Because it's the most romantic place in the world.
In Italy have has a many places that I'm interested in, for example, Florence, Rome and Venice.
First of all I'll fly all the way to Venice . Cities have been named to which is one of the most romantic one of places in the world. (Use a different sentence, as you have already said that Italy is "romantic" )
It is a city full of boats instead of cars; canals instead of roads.
I'll check in the best hotel there, called the Gritti Palace
In the night time I'll have a little of some cocktail and go on a gondola boat to see all around the city
Next I'll never I won't forget to see the art works from a famous artist of Italy like Leonardo da Vinci or Michelangelo Buonarroti
oh ! I almost forget to I'll also visit 2 of the 7 wonders of the world; the Leaning Tower of Pisa and Colosseum.
The last important thing here is shopping. I'll do the shopping at Milan and the Spanish Steps.
I think a month will be fine to travel here there.
I would say the least important thing in stead of the last important thing.
The rest is well-corrected.
nope..not the last statement...overall...
usually, its like...if there are some assumptions or predictions to be made, then, we make use of the word 'would'...but, if its a sure thing to be done in the future...then we use 'will'...
and I was talking of the whole essay- the tone, basically...
so, is the usage of 'will'(at all the places) correct, in this essay?
(had a huge doubt about that...thats y I asked)
Thanks, Kevin!
This essay is about what you WOULD do. What would you do if you could. It is a strange verb tense! It is probably difficult for people to learn. You are doing it correctly, though. If I ask what you will do, you say, "I will fly to Venice." If I ask what you would do, you say, "I'd fly to Venice," or "I would fly to Venice..."
