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Description of tea manufacturing process


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May 22, 2011   #1
Tea, a soft drink made from tea leaves in the hills, is popular in almost countries in the world. The report will describe how the tea is manufactured.

There are numerous steps in the manufacture of tea. Firstly, the top of two leaves and bud are plucked by hand in the dry season and transported to mill. At there, tea leaves and bud wither by hot air for 18 to 24 hours before being placed into a rolling machine to roll, producing the wiry, and curl shape of the tea which lasts from 2 to 3 hours. Afterward, the leaves are put in tray in order to ferment for 1-5 hours. The leaves are then fired in the oven to destroy the enzymes and the stop of fermentation. Subsequently, the leaves are cut, sifted, sorted and graded into different categories at the same time. Next, the tea is exported when the leaves are packed in tea chests. Finally, the tea is tasted and auctioned by the experts before being packed.
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
May 22, 2011   #2
There are numerous steps in the manufacturing of tea.

Firstly, the top of two leaves and bud are plucked by hand during the dry season, and transported to the mill.

Once there, the tea leaves and bud wither by hot air for 18 to 24 hours before being placed into a rolling machine, which produces the wiry, and curled shape of the tea, in a process which lasts from 2 to 3 hours.

Afterward, the leaves are put into a tray in order to ferment for 1-5 hours.

The leaves are then fired in the oven to destroy the enzymes and to stop the fermentation.

The tea is exported after the leaves are packed in tea chests. Finally, the tea is tasted and auctioned by the experts before being packed.----It seems like these last two sentences should be reversed, like they should be auctioned and packed, THEN exported. I could be wrong though.

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