Hi mann.
This is good. However, let me give few suggestion
crime has been occurringtill this day
Avoid spoken expression in formal writing
And latest news about the criminal can be seen on television or internet
This is fragment sentence, you need a main sentence.
. Secondly, sexual crime is become serious threat in this age. But, government has been already overcome with create laws regulating sexual activities. If government has not been able to overcome its cases , public and stakeholders should conscious to combat the crime with increase awareness and carefulness.
Maintain your idea here. It is does not make a sense if the government already overcome the case of sexual crime then you state a conditional situation if the case is not overcome.
Such as creating community triggers and creating new regulating laws more assertive.
It needs a main sentence.
Duo to
due to
This condition proves that commissions need extra works to solve that
It sounds spoken. You should clarify where "that" refers to.
that sexual crime rate steady rise
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that sexual crimes rise steadily.Even though, the government attempts to handle that, in fact, sexual crime still increase
Some issues of punctuation using. A possible suggestion,
Even though the government attempts to hand in the case of sexual crimes, the cases still increase nowadays.Striking backward to your prompt and your conclusion
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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To sum up, crime still occurs almost in all parts of the globe. The crime happens with same cases even new cases every day. Preventing crime is not easy. Government, stakeholders, and publics (public is a plural noun, omit "s") need considerable effort to reduce that cases, because that is impossible to stop the crime.
To engage with the task responses, the conclusion should involve your personal view "To what extend do you agree or disagree".