It shapes the country, and the
economic economy.
I would like to highlight the ongoing 26/11 Mumbai terror case. In this particular case, the Indian government has opted for fast tracking the case. Special public prosecutors and judges are appointed to work on this case.
^In these three consecutive sentences, try substituting in another word for 'case'. Even though it isn't, your use of language may appear to the reader stunted and unsophisticaed with constant repetition. How about 'event', 'occurrence', or 'situation'?
^Also consider another phrase or word for 'fast track'.
This action broke the thought that rich and famous
personality personalities can get away with any type of crime.
^In the last paragraph, cut down on the number of "I think"s being used.
Overall, I would say it's a pretty good attempt. Your sentences and flow of ideas are clear cut and precise, and it is to the point. Good spread of both examples and opinions. However, revise some of your words and phrases and look for alternatives to replace the repetitive ones.
Good job!