Please find my comments below. In general, your essay is good, however your should pay attention a little bit more on the coherence. Cheers :)These days, it seems that there are many
parents are still in favour of
physical punishment to discipline their children. this raises a controversial question of whether if this teaching method is really good or not.
Others prefer to use different methods to reward good behavior or punish misbehavior. It became a controversial issue nowadays . However, I am partially agreeing the physical punishment
. In this essay, I will explore the both sides of this argument and present my own opinions.
Admittedly, there are
to for maintaining allow
First point is that To begin with
, for childrens’ better future, it is vital to teach them discipline form their early
childhood onward by using appropriate methods including physical punishment. This drives from the facts that it is too difficult for parents now and then to manage their small children. In situations that traditional methods such as persuading, explaining or even screaming are helpless, this method seems to be the final one.
Some parents feel it is difficult to manage small children without physical punishment
. The second point is that, this method of teaching shows its quickness and effectiveness in adjusting children's behaviors at a time
it is quick and effective.
For instance, it can be useful to smack a
old child to
quickly stop him from
, who is
it is more memorable those painful moments can make deep impression in children's minds
, it deters them from repeating the same mistakes
in the future. Therefore,
, it will help them to learn the rights
from the wrongs
in a better
use this way of teaching is used appropriately and selectively depending upon certain circumstancesd properly
Nevertheless, this method has some drawbacks.
parents are allowed to hit their children for the sake of teaching discipline teaching discipline is used just as a shield for frequent smacking children, it may cause immeasurable consequences
ome parents may lose control and can injure children. More dangerously,
find it as an easy way to release their stress. Over the time,
It will lead to more physical and emotional damages
on to their
. It and
further spoil the
relationship between the child and parents. Particularly, when it not proportional to their age and seriousness of the crime. For instance, beating 16 yrs old who came late from school once is not
good as comparable to
smacking a screaming
2years old two-year-old
Additionally, physical punishment is banned in some countries and schools because of some solid reasons. Chief among this is that, this will protect the child from
. Another point is that, it teaches the children that they can use force to make others to do what we want, especially when didn’t understand their mistake. Besides, small words of appreciations and motivations are not only
beneficial for children to understand their mistakes and think about it, but also
and follow good habits.
In conclusion, physical punishment causes adverse impacts on childrens’ life. In my perception, it can be a useful method of discipline in small children
if is only
used carefully, selectively
, as a last resort.