In this sentence, I think it is okay either way. When it is okay to use commas or not, I choose not, because that way the sentence is decisive like a quick thrust of a spear.
Thats interesting, I learnt something.
unimagined extraordinary power
I think extraordinary is more suitable here too
curiosity of the unknown
Sorry I haven't noticed this earlier. curiosity for
the unknown. Curiosity of the unknown sounds like the ' unknown' 's curiosity to me.
The word impossible does not match with human nature has amply evident by global history.
is there a missing punctuation in this line? I can't comprehend this line.
The word impossible does not match with human nature , there is
evident byevidence in
global history. or it is evident in global history
The history of civilization exemplifies that
in his journey from the Bronze Age to the Modern times, Humanity has
brought changes by continuously trying to improve their means of living.The human discoveries and inventions
of the continue efforts.
never tried to discover the new sea routes to India and China until 14 century. The circumstance changes with the
change of Political Power in Mediterranean Region. The Europeans
tarted to send expedition to discover the new trade route to India, and their continuous effort at last rewarded. They discovered
the new route to India through Cape of Hope, and also the new spectrum of knowledge during an
expedition that led to discovery of New World. Before then it was impossible because they never tried to discover
When we think about any matter as impossible, then it really is impossible, because we are not trying to make it possible. When we change our attitude and try to make it possible. Then it does not remain impossible.
Please check that I have not misinterpreted and altered the message you are
trying to convey.
I think that you have to be more mindful of your grammar and puntuations.
Also, you keep repeating certain words such as ' change ', maybe you can use other synonyms
such as altered; shifted; varied; revolution; transition..
This makes the essay less dull.
I am speaking for myself too, my teacher pointed out that I always repeat words due to lack of vocabulary. ~,~
Hope it was helpful :)