It is not uncommon for us to see that many people champion that unpaid community service should be an indispensable part of high school programmes. This trend is benefit for students who intend to obtain the first-hand experience from this.
It is not uncommon for us to see that many people advocate that unpaid community services should be an indispensable part of high school programs. This certainly benefits students who intend to obtain the first-hand experience.
this behavior for students that can gain a vast number of value life skills
This behavior ? what behavior ? you can say " these extra curricular activities help students gain a vast number of social skills
Besides , they also in a position to enhance the ability to manage time which where therefore improve the efficiency and practice the organization ability
they also have chances to develop time-management skill and organizing skill
Admittly , most of high school students will not be happy if they forced to join the community service without payment
Admittedly -> However
they are forced
I think some students who have doesn't have loaded parents are not ready for the unpaid work
have doesn't have -> have not
somothers
other things
final session students can't pay enough concentrate on their study that the community service occupy too much spare time
final session students -> final year students/ senior
can't -> cannot
concentrate is verb, not noun -> students cannot concentrate on their study because the community services occupy most of their time
fullment
fulfillment
If there is a real benefit both to the education of students ,and increase in welfare to society as a whole
If..., what next ? i'm so confused what you mean
provide the hours required are not very significant
Providing the hours required is not significant
Your writing have many grammatical errors. You should check it carefully :)