Jocelyne 1
Jocelyne Santana
Professor Smith
English 101
The city v small town-county.
The fast-paced life, the constant acceleration of the city, leads people to live quickly. People are looking for any excuse to live more slowly and find a quieter place. Some senior citizen prefers being as much as far from the city, like the suburbs, or small towns, quiet and peaceful neighborhoods. The suburbs with big lands and without the noise, the hard working pressure, the contaminated air and more. Remarkable differenced, between the big cities and small town-county.
Let think for one moment back in the old days, where there was no cars, no sirens, all we could remember is people coming or going to the big city walking or in horses. These days, one of the problems arising is the overpopulation. The noises and to go thru the crowed people are the "bread of every day", many people with a hurry pace of life. Otherwise in the small town, there is more free space, fresh air, not to many people, and much more ways to relax and been away from the noise, and the anxiety of the people.
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Jocelyne 2
Going on a trip to the center city these days it has being a nightmare, with the busy streets, cars all over bumper to bumper, dirt air, people running and living a such accelerated life. The main conversations in the street are the actual financial crisis, the highest unemployment rate, and the insufficient funds for the community's environments. The constantly pressure, noisy street, people are looking a way to relax. These has become one of the reasons people has changed their minds to look for a better way to live. No one is thinking in the great movies, theaters, the adventures they might have. The economy has forced people to invent or create their own ways to have fun without spending too much money.
While in a small town you get the opportunity to meet new people, feel a sense of community, and at the same time, find local recreation center. New manner to have your family involve in other resource. Neighborhood completely involved with the community, which absorb all the time you may have, enjoying the best service and the good entertainments.
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Jocelyne 3
There are much more areas to pastime, have a walk around the park, driving or walking to the play grounds with your kids. Not hearing or feeling the busy, hot street, the crowed people screaming one to another. Enjoying going to the farms, smelling the fresh air, relaxing the mines and thoughts. es and t Something, you can't do in the big city, because our society lives in such of hurry, and annoying trying to see for themselves and not was good for all.
One of the advantages in a small town is having the chance to have big lands, which is something the city does not provide. Land where we can work and live from what we had worked. Where the noise, the sirens are hard to hear. Houses apart from one to another forcing you either to go over or call to see you're next neighbored. Where the atmosphere, the air is more pure and delicious, making you to never go back to the busy big city.
Hopping one day the old days comes back, always thinking that we are the ones who make the place enjoyable or unpleasant. Bring the best of all, turning your environment the best way you can.
Some senior citizens prefer being as much as far from the city as possible -- in the suburbs, or small towns, quiet and peaceful neighborhoods.
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Jocelyne 3
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