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City is more convienent than countryside


Sardor 77 2 / 1  
Dec 28, 2012   #1
In the modren world whether children should grow up in the countryside or in the city is outstanding issue. Some parents think that countryside brings more benifit than noise and overcrowded city. Wheares other people feel that the city is the best spot to bring up a child. I agree with those people who think that the city is more convienent than countryside.

To begin with, the big city provides better educational condition. This means that it is the best route to reach goals.
nounouboo 3 / 6  
Dec 28, 2012   #2
A big question that boggles people's minds in the modern world is whether children should grow up in the countryside or in the city. Some parents prefer the countryside because it brings more benefit to their child rather than in the noisy, overcrowded city. Other parents feel that the city is the best spot to raise children because it allows them to be more independent. I would have to agree with those parents who think the city is more convenient because it provides a better educational environment than the countryside.

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