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Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree?


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Oct 17, 2008, 06:17pm   #1
Essay topic: Cigarretes has been banned from public environment. Agree or Disagree??

Around the world people are concerned about the problems that smoking habit provide. Laws, assignments, advertising have been created in a way to make people stop smoking. Recently, one law was approved in Canada, which prohibits people to smoke in public environment. The major reasons why cigarettes should be banned from public areas are, the damaging to health, inconvenience for others non-smoking and because it is a way to make people quit that habit.

The first and most important reason why cigarettes should be banned from a public environment is because it is harmful to people health. First of all, cigarettes can create numerous diseases. In particular, if someone smokes for more than 5 years one pack of cigarettes per day he/she have 45% more chances to have a lung cancer. Also, diseases, such as, breathless, mouth cancer and heart attack are caused by smoking habit. Secondly, in the cigarettes there are many substances extremely addictive. For instance, cigarettes are one of the most addictives drugs; specialist says that stop smoking is more challenge for a person than stop using cocaine. Thus, prohibiting smoking in public areas is one good way to make people diminish that horrible habit.

Another major reason smoking should be prohibited from public environment is the fact that cause inconvenience for people who do not smoke. In fact, who have never been disturbed in a restaurant or mall from that unpleasant and irritating smell coming from a smoker nearby? It is often give us headaches and feelings of hangover. Furthermore, some people cannot stand close of who is smoking because they have health problem. Such as, allergic, lung problems and asthma. Therefore, forbidding people to smoke in public environments is healthy and help people with specific diseases.

The last reason why cigarettes might be eliminated from public environment is the fact that it could help people quitting. First of all, governments and specialist are trying to find way to make people quite smoke. In fact, the statics made from the Cancer Institute in Ohio, US, show that the percentages of young people smoking are increasing. However, advertising in cigarettes packs and laws are good way to incentive people stop that habit.

In conclusion, cigarettes are harmful for the health. In addition, for a better life and health smokers should quit that habit as soon as possible. And avoid diseases, such as, cancer and pulmonary embolism.

Thank you a lot!!
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"Around the world people are concerned about the problems that the smoking habit provides. Laws, assignments, and advertising has been created in a way to make people stop smoking. Recently, one law was approved in Canada (Remove comma) which prohibits people from smoking in public environments. The major reasons why cigarettes should be banned from public areas are the damage to health, inconveniences to other non-smokers, and because it is a way to make people quit that habit.

The first and most important reason why cigarettes should be banned from a public environment is because it is harmful to people's health. First of all, cigarettes can create numerous diseases. In particular, if someone smokes for more than 5 years one pack of cigarettes per day he/she have 45% more chances to have a lung cancer. Do you have a source to support this fact? Also, diseases such as shortness of breath, mouth cancer, and heart attacks are caused by a smoking habit. Secondly, in the cigarettes there are many substances extremely addictive. For instance, cigarettes are one of the most addictive drugs; specialists say that stopping smoking is more challenging for a person to stop than cocaine. Thus, prohibiting smoking in public areas is one good way to make people diminish that horrible habit.

Another major reason smoking should be prohibited from public environments is the fact that it causes inconveniences for people who do not smoke. In fact, who has never been disturbed in a restaurant or mall from that unpleasant and irritating smell coming from a smoker nearby? It often gives us headaches and feelings of hangover. Furthermore, some people cannot stand close by someone who is smoking because they have a health problem of their own s uch as allergies, lung problems, and asthma. Therefore, forbidding people to smoke in public environments is healthy and help people with specific diseases.

The last reason why cigarettes might be eliminated from public environments is the fact that it could help people quitting. First of all, governments and specialist are trying to find ways to make people quit smoking. In fact, the statics made from the Cancer Institute in Ohio, show that the percentages of young people smoking are increasing. However, advertising on cigarettes packs and laws are good ways to motivate people to stop that habit.

In conclusion, cigarettes are harmful for the health. In addition, for a better life and health smokers should quit that habit as soon as possible and avoid diseases." I shortened the conclusion because as it was it sounded like you were going to start another paragraph.

I hope this helps.

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Gloria
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Oct 17, 2008, 10:25pm   #3
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