Here are my suggestions:
"Around the world people are concerned about the problems that the
smoking habit provides
. Laws, assignments, and
been created in a way to make people stop smoking. Recently, one law was approved in Canada (Remove comma)
which prohibits people from smoking
in public environments
. The major reasons why cigarettes should be banned from public areas are the damage
to health, inconveniences to other non-smokers,
and because it is a way to make people quit that habit.
The first and most important reason why cigarettes should be banned from a public environment is because it is harmful to people's
health. First of all, cigarettes can create numerous diseases. In particular, if someone smokes for more than 5 years one pack of cigarettes per day he/she have 45% more chances to have a lung cancer. Do you have a source to support this fact?
such as shortness of breath
, mouth cancer,
and heart attacks
are caused by a
smoking habit. Secondly, in the cigarettes there are many substances extremely addictive. For instance, cigarettes are one of the most addictive
drugs; specialists say
smoking is more challenging
for a person to stop than cocaine
. Thus, prohibiting smoking in public areas is one good way to make people diminish that horrible habit.
Another major reason smoking should be prohibited from public environments
is the fact that it
for people who do not smoke. In fact, who has
never been disturbed in a restaurant or mall from that unpleasant and irritating smell coming from a smoker nearby? It often gives
us headaches and feelings of hangover. Furthermore, some people cannot stand close by someone
who is smoking because they have a
health problem of their own s
uch as allergies, lung problems,
and asthma. Therefore, forbidding people to smoke in public environments is healthy and help people with specific diseases.
The last reason why cigarettes might be eliminated from public environments
is the fact that it could help people quitting. First of all, governments and specialist are trying to find ways
to make people quit smoking
. In fact, the statics made from the Cancer Institute in Ohio, show
that the percentages of young people smoking are increasing. However, advertising on
cigarettes packs and laws are good ways
stop that habit.
In conclusion, cigarettes are harmful for the health. In addition, for a better life and health smokers should quit that habit as soon as possible and
." I shortened the conclusion because as it was it sounded like you were going to start another paragraph.
I hope this helps.