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Choosing desirable subjects to study in the university?


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Topic: Some people think that the government should choose the subjects that students will study in the university, while others say that students should be the ones to choose their preferred subjects. What is your opinion about this? Give your reasons and include relevant examples.


The development of every country in the world requires human resources and educated people. Thus, many students are encouraged to continue their study in the university. There is a consideration that the government should choose the disciplines that students will study in the university. However, some groups of people believe that giving priority to students to choose their favourite subjects to study is more desirable. In my opinion, I think that students have to choose subjects to study in the university themselves, but the government ought to take a small part in students' decision.

Some people have talents since they were born, so it is a good idea to give freedom to them to choose subjects that are suitable for them and require their talents. Moreover, students might feel disappointed and discouraging if the subjects which are chosen for them are the disciplines they do not want to learn. As a consequence, they do not study hard and concentrate well on their education, which cause some problems to their performance in their future job.

On the one hand, the government should recommend some disciplines to students who are indecisive about what they are going to study in the university . In this way, students can make a quicker and better decision. Furthermore, the government has to inform their people about the job sectors that are lack of people working in. Therefore, the number of people working in various job sectors will be balanced and it is more efficient for students to find jobs after graduating from the university.

Taking everything into account, I believe that it is more preferable for pupils to select their desirable subjects to study in the university themselves. Despite that, the government must also play a role in helping some students to choose suitable subjects because it helps the development of the country as well as helping students.
Hi,in my idea students should choose their major in university.because they know their ability,intrests,experience and the most important thing is their future job that they want to have.on the other hand if government choose their major they will not have problems such an unemployment. because government choose major according to its need for a job in the future.but there will be people who don't like their job and as you know job satisfaction is an impotant thing and it will effect on their work's quality.
Scientiana:
the government should choose the disciplines that students will study in the university.

what?! When would it ever be appropriate for the government to decide what people study? It is not appropriate for parents or government to make decisions for other people....

Keep the tense the same:
Moreover, students might feel disappointed and discouraged discouraging if the subjects which are chosen for them are the disciplines they do not want to learn.

On the one hand, the government should recommend some disciplines to students who are indecisive about what they are going to study in the university----Everything you wrote is very wise and eloquently expressed. This is looking good. I cannot imagine anyone ever thinking the government should choose for students.

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Apr 24, 2011, 11:44am   #5
I read your essay, and it is a completed essay with a good conclusion.
Besides, you have enough details to argue about the first subpoint.
good try
Bahareh



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