discuss both these views and give your opinion
You are being asked to
discuss both these views and give your opinion. However, there's no harm you stating your own opinion in the introduction itself. It is nicer when you conclude the intro with a statement expressing your opinion very clearly.
On the other hand,schools also greatly contribute to mould a child in to a productive person to the society.cC hildren learn many things from school such as discipline, caring,sharing and good manners.Moreover,by participating in group activities help them to interact with their peers in an accepted manner and perform activities with co_operation.Whereas,they have not get this opportunity In their home.
Discussing more details in how school helps students' development as members of the society is your task. Instead of explaining the surface of the several keywords, let's say: accepted manner and perform activities with co_operation, better go deeper. Also, adding one specific example is an excellent idea.