In recent times, some children consider sports to be a mandatory activity in their daily routine while others neglect it to be an optional one. It is felt that young generation should treat sports to be a positive phenomenon. This will be shown by looking at how a child gets benefited from health and behavioural perspective getting involved various sports.
... Well, it is always better to conclude your introduction with a statement that clearly expresses your opinion ( a thesis statement) . The last line you have written is pretty vague and I feel such lines do not effectively contribute for your writing.
So, the kids who get engaged in any such games are thought to possess good health
and fitness.You write very well... pay more attention to your essay structure :)