Growing up Raising
children is a big burden on parents' shoulders.
---No comma here--- the most important part of this process is education, in my opinion,
growing up raising
children in a city, because of having a good education system, is better.
The first and foremost reason why I think cities are better places for
children is because cities have the latest teaching devices and methods.
Moreover, it takes a lot of time for children who live in countrysides to use these new methods.---In some cases this is true, but not everywhere.
For instance, when internet emerged
as the most
important tool for research in schools, schools which are located in countrysides did
not have internet and it took five years before
they are able to use the
Second, usually cities have a better facilities and teachers.---I don't think this is true!
There are different schools in cities, in
which each one has its own advantages.
In addition, this big number of schools makes for
good competitions between schools to give a better service to their students.
As cities have more facilities and more schools for teaching, teachers prefer to stay in a city rather than in the
Last but not least, the
education cost is less expensive in cities than in the
Besides, some big companies that are
only located in big cities provide some facilities for their staffs such as providing free education service.
To sum up, education is the most significant part of raising
One day if I had a
chance choice of whether
my children in either the
a city, I would prefer to
grow up raise
my children in a city.