It's an interesting short essay, but you could add details in a number of places to make it better. I could come up with some qualities that I'd like my ideal man to possess.
First of all, I'd like him to be a cheerful person.
ife is more enjoyable
when I have with
a cheerful man. A cheerful man who has a great sense of humor
will openly communicate his thoughts and share everything .
I don't want a man that bores me; he should be able to make me laugh all the time.
Next, it's important for him to be considerate. I
want a man who
do anything to make me happy. He must
me with affection and tenderness.
Especially If anything
, he needs to share my household chores when I'm tired. In addition, he should be willing to share in
as well as be
with all of about
my negative habits
teach me to become a better person
. Most of all, I want a faithful man. He
must can neither
or cheat on
me. On the contrary
, he must also
stay true to me
in his heart. Furthermore, he is a person who will stand by my side no matter what. If my ideal man is faithful, we will have such a strong bond that nothing will ever be able to
tear us apart break it
In conclusion, I believe that I'll live a happy life with a man
having who has such good characteristics like these with these ideal characteristics