Other people
In the context, I mentioned about celebrities, some of them have negative style of living, and other people = other celebrities
"Spread message of a convenient life" => what do you mean?
I mean this Paris makes this message be known by a wide range of people. I look up for 'spread' in dictionary and it says spread: to affect or make sth affect, be known by, etc
"effort" => "efforts"
Effort (uncountable noun), in this case, means endeavor not attempts (countable)
"Individuals" => "individual"
'individuals' replace the phrase ' a group of people'
"Who achieving" => "who achieve" or "achieving"
I forget eliminating the word 'who' :D
Regarding the introduction, I want to express a balance opinion that celebrities are good in some ways, and are bad in other ways. I think I disclose my opinion: 'I believe' to make clear my idea.
They are all of my opinion. By the way, I am very grateful for your feedback, ningo