I'm preparing for Ielts
You need more words to write. It is only 180 words, dear :(
Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future?
Para 1: Intro, restating the prompt (including hook and thesis)
Para 2: better to
enjoy your money. To support this, give one specific example
Para 3: better to
save your money. Also, raise one specific example
Para 4: As usual, restate the intro.
Use simple, compound, and complex sentences to create your paras. Paying attention to simple grammar: an articles, subject-verb agreement, plurals, and prepositions.
Brainstorm the ideas to help you easy construct the development of paras
Hope this helps :D