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IELTS> BOYS AND GIRLS SHOULD BE IN MIXED SCHOOLS OR SEPARATE SCHOOLS?


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Oct 3, 2011, 06:21am   #1
Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.



It is true that children are holding the key to future of a country. Therefore, educating these young owners appropriately is always a top priority of the country. Although, some people might hold that it is more beneficial for boys and girls to study together, there is an opposite opinion that each gender should be educated in separate schools. In this essay, both of these viewpoints will be discussed before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.

First, to argue for letting boys and girls go to mixed schools, many people would say that it will make both genders mingle with each other and have a good behavior when being in front of the other. For example, a female student in a mixed school would not have a feeling of shy or embarrassment, but instead have confidence and joyfulness when having a conversation with a male student. The experiences they have when studying together in the same school will certainly be an advantage for them when they start working since both sexes will be working together in the same environment. Thus, it is easy to see why the idea that boys and girls should be more benefited from attending mixed schools will have great support.

However, the critics of the idea of mixed schools may argue that putting both boys and girls into one school will cause some negative effects. For one, it could be that the students may get distracted by the occurrence of the students of the other sex in the school. This is because, some students might, at a certain age, will start to have a special feeling or love towards their classmates and then they can not focus on studying and get bad academic results. If the students can not concentrate on their studies when they are at school then there will be no point for them to attend classes. This is why it is necessary to have schools for each gender in order to achieve better education.

In conclusion, after conducting the analysis for both of the viewpoints, it seems to me that boys and girls may better attend separate schools because, at young ages, they should focus on studying and obtaining as much knowledge as they can.

Oct 3, 2011, 08:43am   #2
Therefore, educating these young owners[a little bit ..awkward.. how about successor ? ] appropriately is always a top priority of the country.

that each gender should be educated in separate schools separately.

First, to argue for letting boys and girls go to mixed schools [coeducational schools]

many people supporters would say that
Oct 3, 2011, 01:26pm   #3
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It is true that (Redundant?) children are holding the key to future of a country. Therefore, educating these the young (collective noun here) owners appropriately is always a top priority of the country. Although, some people might hold that it is more beneficial for boys and girls to study together, there is an opposite opinion that each gender should be educated in separate schools. In this essay, both of these viewpoints will be discussed before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.

First, to argue for letting boys and girls go to mixed schools, many people advocators would say that it will makes both genders mingle with each other and have a good behavior impose a positive influence on interpersonal relationship when being in front of the other. For example, a female student in a mixed school would not have a feeling of shy or embarrassment, but instead have confidence and joyfulness when having a conversation with a male student. The experiences they have when studying together in the same school will certainly be an advantage for them when they start working since both sexes will have many opportunities to be working work together in modern society the same environment. Thus, it is easy to see why the idea that boys and girls should would be more benefited benefit from attending mixed schools will have great support because they can practice their social interaction skills.

However, the critics of the idea of mixed schools may claim argue that putting both boys and girls into one school will causes some negative effects. For one, it could be that the students may get distracted by the occurrence of the students of the other with the opposite sex in the school. This is because, some students might, at a certain age, will start to have a special feeling or love towards their classmates. and then As a consequence, they can not cannot focus on studying, which leads to and get bad academic results. If the students can not cannot concentrate on their studies when they are at going to school, then it would be pointless there will be no point for them to attend classes. This is why to achieve a better education, establishing separate schools for each gender is necessary.

In conclusion, after conducting the analysis for both of the viewpoints, it seems to me that boys and girls may better attend separate schools because, at young ages, they should focus on studying and obtaining as much knowledge as they can.



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