Haste makes waste
In my opinion, haste is not such a bad thing as many think. Everyone will agree, that a person – "like a fire" manages to make different kinds of job at the same time, while some people can't manage to do even one thing properly.
There is a moment in everyone's life, when a sudden decision must to be made.It's great, when a person has a superiority to make better decisions. I think that people from this category are open-minded and have a lot of energy.Such kind of woman drives a car with a rush and does housework quickly. These people can do indoor and outdoor work and manage to look attractive, as they find time for visiting the beauty salons too. They have family, children and a good job.A "like a fire" woman often has literate and well-behavioured children. People with a great deal of energy usually sleep less. Sleep for few hours is enough for them to wake up with a full energy. A man in haste always finds way to earn and spend money.Personally, I am quite jealous of this type of people.
Sometimes making quick decisions,will bring you in an embarrassing situation. In this case, it would be properl to say: "Haste makes waste". I used to be in situations, where my conclusion appeared to be wrong and even harmful, due to haste. Then, regretting about the taken steps was . Oh, I remember all the mistakes I have done during my conscious life.It is mainly beacause of my impatience.
In conclusion, in my point of viewpeople living in haste are very successful. Managing all their jobs quickly is a key point of their achievement. On the other hand, there are people who are sleeping while going somewhere or doing something. This is an awesome thing.
You tried to make a structured essay, but without having a flow it is useless. Try to connect the different ideas using more logic sentences. The word choice is often wrong, however, words usually written without errors. Pretty bad punctiation and too much background information in both introductory and conclusion part.