In countries all over the world, heavy traffic is one of the biggest headaches for people.
Here we are, t
This problem has been growing in Ho Chi Minh city, Vietnam.
The world has been developing, and our country is also developing. Becoming a developed country we must...
Many people say: "Heavy traffic" is a problem that is the work of administrative power and traffic police.
this isn't a truth those duties are themself.
What are you trying to say here?
All in all, of the points I made above,
aim a purose
the main idea is that I hope we can make our society become wonderful and stress-free by reducing the problem of heavy traffic.
I hope these revisions help you, but your English still needs a lot of work. It is hard to understand what you are trying to say. Keep practicing! Your English sure is better than my Vietnamese!