Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified

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Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified.
Are there any alternatives to animal experimentation?

The subject of experimentation on animals is a complex one. Ever body use this for different aims. Such people use for a scientific purpose, and they think that it is justifiable.

First of all, we should start by taking a look at a purpose of experimentation on animals. Nowadays, mostly animals are using for cosmetic products. For instance , such company want to release new product for making more money. They must be practice this for that reason they use animals instead of humans. I disagree with this because I think that companies can make a profit without doing experimentation on animals.

Secondly turning to the second purpose is for making drugs. Today every time scientists invent new drugs, and they do not know it will affect bad or good. They think that animals bodies are more likely suitable for testing than human's bodies. However, with this way they can damage the animals bodies and in the future animals begin to suffer from different complaints or diseases. Furthermore, it will also completely ruin animal's life, they will be poisonous or they can die for only one's practice.

In conclusion, I think that experimentation on animals for a specific purpose such as cosmetic or scientific are not justified. We should use another way for our experimentation. Because we should think that we will get success with this experiment. However, we will also ruin some animal's life completely.

Everyone uses this for different aims. ---What do you mean by this?

Some people use animals for a scientific purpose, and they think that it is justifiable.

Nowadays, mostly animals are used for testing cosmetic products.

For instance, such companies want to release new products for making more money.

Secondly,turning to the other purpose is for making drugs.

Today every time scientists invent new drugs, and they do not know it whether it will affect for bad or good.

In conclusion, I think that experimentation on animals for a specific purpose such as cosmetic or scientific is not justified.

We should find another way for our experimentation.

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EF_Susan
first ! Nowadays, mostly animals are used for testing cosmetic products. >>> here, i think ! Nowadays , mostly animals have been used for testing cosmetic products.

second! i have read in some books that using subjectivity( I, you, He..) in the essay is not useful ! would you mind if you help me with this !