These days the number of visitors who
are travel to foreign countries
hashave been
markedlysignificantly increased. Culture awareness lead to many benefits as well as there are many problems for those who do not understand
culture.cultural differences.who travel to foreign countries / who are travelers to foreign countriesMisunderstanding of culture would cause many problems for both side: the native and the foreigner. Take for example someone who use body language without taking into account inhabitants' culture, would insulting religious customs. For instance, in Muslim countries shaking hand with alien women is forbidden; Moreover wearing scarf and loose-fitting clothes is common among Muslims nations due to feeling secure as written in holy Quran. As a result it is better to take some research in advance to familiar much more with destination. Thus cultural misunderstanding has many drawbacks.
This body para is pretty good.... very informative
Overall, you need to improve on grammar :) But you have good writing skills and bright ideas, so you've got the potential to improve a lot :)