Here are the following corrections on your writing:
I am kumar sourav.I am from Nilokheri,a small town in karnal
district,haryana.Presently i am working with *** company as an associate system Engineer from Nov 2009 .My profile (I think my profile thing can be replaced as "my job title")
is as a BizTalk developer and support with *** account.Before Nov i was working with XXX as Engineer-trainee.
as per my family,my father is a businessman and my mother is a homemaker.We have a business of egg trading and poultries.
I strongest belief is self belief
I have a strong self-belief and I love talking to people.
going to gym,rapping and surfing.
My short term aim is to join a reputed b-school to gain sufficient knowledge and learning about various aspects of business so that some time down the line i can
join my family business and help it to expand with my inputs.
**note: It would be better if you organize your working experience chronically (from oldest to newest)