Here are my suggestions:
"The national costume that every woman wears in my country,
is Aodai. On the top is a collar. It has a
mandarin style, high, and upright
. The sleeves are long. These little details make the dress more secretive. The body of the dress is simple but impressive. The bodice is tight with a fitted
tunic at the breast, waist, and
here is a line of buttons on the right that covers totally
yet it lets the woman's
beautiful figure be seen and admired in such a feminine way that I can't find any word to describe. The two flap of garment can be either very long down to the ankles or just stopped short below the knees. It splits in the gown above waist height to make it comfortable and easy to move in. The pants are long and loose. With the loosely flowing
pants and the floating garment, the dress makes the woman wearing it
look really graceful. To make the dress more sensitive, the fabric most used is silk or thin and soft material with all the hues of the rainbow. Aodai is a special costume that makes woman more beautiful, sensual, gentle, modern, and traditional."
A paragraph is around six to eight sentences, or however long it takes to "get the job done." This works really well; not too long, not too short. Nice work.