Hello, Lynn. Your points and your writing are quite good. Maybe you can try to relate the conclusion more to the entire essay or the topic--you didn't mention consumer rights organizations anywhere else...=)
I would agree that
advertising has a great impact on the sales of any product . Consumers seem to be urged to buy cheap, discounted
, but unnecessary goods
because they are frequently advertised on television or other types of media.
One of the reasons for this prompt responding to
advertisement is that
advertised products look too appealing for consumers to deny
the deals . It is obviously seen that there would be a long queue of ladies, early in the morning, standing in front of
a shops if
yesterday they received the information that "the early birds will get a fridge at one dollar". They are pulled to come not only to
be the win
ners of that extremely cheap deal, but also
because the shoppers of other items displayed in the shops.
Do any of them really need another fridge if they already ha
ve one at home?
but also the shoppers of other items displayed in the shops
Are the shoppers or the items being displayed in the shops?