Hi :) I can make some suggestions to help you improve your paper. You have some excellent ideas and you have thought about the subject well.
The purpose is to essentially choose what your argument is to be in regards to the question. Therefore, your paper should be based on your opinion. The only real glimpse of your own thought is when you state "As for me, I think that advertising makes our life better rather than not. However, it must be regulated by 100 percents government laws."
I would mention which side you are on close to the beginning of the essay.Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need.
Try not to repeat the exact words in the original question, instead build upon what reasons you gave to support your argument.
There are some sentences that need grammar editing:
1) In other words, advertising inspires people that possessions of some things made them happy and successful.
2) Succumbed to these influences, people just have a kind of sickness because they can't stop. Everyone start buying more and more, but their needs grow too and it is never enough.
3) Advertising brings us some information and it is not always useless torrent of information. There things which can improve human's life, and after all we always can choose and decide by ourselves.
4) However, it must be regulated by 100 percents government laws.