not sure if I am right to post my journal writing on this page.
You certainly are right. Your journaling is as meaningful and significant as anyone's writing about anything. I'm glad you are here!
Small error:
go out
for running. ---it is not even really an error... just sounds funny.
Ha ha, great use of goodlookingly! That is definitely not a word I have ever seen. Thanks for enriching my life!I eat a lot, yet nevertheless I am good-lookingly skinny and slim.
Needless to say, running or
exercising on the regular basis lift up not only our physical strength, but also self-confidence; I do not know if it is applicable to others, but definitely and undoubtedly it is to me.----excellent sentence, but put an s on the end of lift.
lifts.
If you said "and" it would need no s, but you said or, so it needs an s. :-)
It is therefore absolutely imperative that we should not get addicted to something addictive and eliminate and get rid of the bad habits, if any.------ it is redundant to say "addicted to something addictive.: Just say "We should not become addicted to anything."
But how can one avoid addiction? You are addicted to food and water, because you get very uncomfortable without them. You are addicted to this light show of life. How can one say "no" to something? I believe it is only when there is something else that you want more. If you ever fall into addiction, I hope you'll renew your passion for making a positive impact on the world.