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IS EATING NO MEAT AND FISH REALLY SO BENEFICIAL?

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Writing Feedbackalif - Jun 14, 2015
Adhisti
Jun 30, 2015
IELTS TASK 2: Students choose to study English independently

4 - Thank you Mr. Eddy for your suggestion.

Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Jun 29, 2015
Adhisti
Jun 30, 2015
Financial penalties in traffic. Should fines be mainly applied rather than some other policies?

9 - I'm sorry, I make mistake. This is right. The aforementioned evidence reveals that monetary penalties are the most viable solution...

Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015
IqbalThemi
Jun 29, 2015
Should we save and restore some languages?

3 - There is nothing unusual about a single or two languages dying. In fact, throughout mankind history, communities and dynasties have come...

Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 29, 2015
Adhisti
Jun 29, 2015
Having more than one job. Possible causes and suggestions for future working.

4 - Firstly, due to the demand of having more exciting working environments, workers today are no longer expecting to spend their working...

Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015
Adhisti
Jun 29, 2015
Although we cannot emit automobiles from our world, they work destructive for our quality of life

4 - This is an informative essay about cars! What you need though is better form. For example, you need separate...

Writing FeedbackNaph - May 27, 2015
EF_Carol
Jun 29, 2015
Nature and nurture on human's intelligence - innate inheritance and personal experiences influence

3 - - In my opinion, neither of these two factors alone is enough for individuals'one's development. - SecondlyNow, nurture plays a...

Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015
justivy03
Jun 29, 2015
Do movies or TV influence people's behaviour? Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.

3 - Thank you so much!!

Writing Feedbackalinatsoy12 - Jun 29, 2015
alinatsoy12
Jun 29, 2015
Responsibility of problems - People or Governments

3 - Eric27, WELCOME to the EssayForum Family, it's a pleasure to have yet another member of the ever-growing EF Family. Now,...

Writing FeedbackEric2750230 - Jun 28, 2015
justivy03
Jun 29, 2015
Should all education and healthcare be funded by the government and free for everyone?

3 - All you have to do is to maintain this performance when it comes to your real exam. Make sure that you...

Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Jun 28, 2015
eddies
Jun 29, 2015
Childhood life is the most important period

5 - I have some small suggestions: ' Consequence, It reflects on their health in future' => Subsequently, it reflects on their...

Writing FeedbackM19O09F11 - Jun 25, 2015
tuananh
Jun 28, 2015
Are testing and examinations justified? The current system needs some improvements.

4 - I think that your essay is so much better than mine which base on the same topic of yours. I have...

Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 28, 2015
tuananh
Jun 28, 2015
The appreciation for positive actions is the best way to teach

5 - Well, this opening sentence is not in conjunction with the prompt given. You need to replace it, e.g it is...

Writing Feedbackanamikam_vns - Jun 25, 2015
eddies
Jun 28, 2015
GRE ISSUE - evaluation of the most effective teaching methods.

7 - Thank you very much for your help and useful instructions. I will follow the same. I will keep writing and will...

Writing FeedbackJunisha111p - Jun 28, 2015
Junisha111p
Jun 28, 2015
Are examinations good selectors off the classrooms?

3 - Tuananh, WELCOME to EssayForum Family, we're growing and we're thrilled to have you as part of the family. I'll be...

Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015
justivy03
Jun 28, 2015
Insecure feelings in people. Causes and suggestions.

3 - - There is a large number of number (make sure to proof read)of people who experience the sense of being unsafeunsafetiness...

Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 27, 2015
justivy03
Jun 28, 2015
The intrinsic value of doing homework. Is it necessary for students?

3 - Kuroneko, WELCOME to EssayForum, we're an ever - growing family and we're happy to have you!!! Now, I will try...

Writing FeedbackKuroNeko - Jun 27, 2015
justivy03
Jun 28, 2015
What should be taught in universities?

3 - I have only one suggestion: 'the primary culprit' instead of ' the main culprit' Anyway, your essay is great!...

Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 23, 2015
tuananh
Jun 28, 2015
Traditional library vs internet - what should be more supported?

3 - Your essay is really great but I still think that your introduction is quite long and also, I think ' primarily'...

Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 26, 2015
tuananh
Jun 28, 2015
Traffic problems - a headache issue that we have to solve right now for the society development

9 - you must be taking the university entrance exam in Vietnam? MOD comment: The only allowed comments are those regarding the...

Writing FeedbackEddie16 - Jun 26, 2015
lacusclyne
Jun 27, 2015
Why it is correct that you take the BUOP's grant? Because I am "Progressive"

6 - Hi lcturn87. I wanna say big thank you because i got this grant yesterday after short interview. it was my first...

Writing FeedbackTumenkhusel - Jun 19, 2015
Tumenkhusel
Jun 27, 2015
The controversial issue - how to combine spendings for education with sport and recreation?

7 - Thank you guys so much :)

Writing Feedbackcookie234 - Jun 26, 2015
cookie234
Jun 27, 2015
Students broad spectrum of knowledge? It would be an important step to improve their personality.

3 - I would like to help you with a few more revisions to your paper. I think you should begin your essay...

Writing Feedbackanamikam_vns - Jun 27, 2015
lcturn87
Jun 27, 2015
[TOEFL] Books and Internet, which one is better to use to research?

9 - I think its perfect but some correction is needed like in ur both body paragraph i find the same information,in the...

Writing Feedbackwadpk - Jun 25, 2015
Jaggi7921
Jun 26, 2015
It is quite common presently for younger people to have a break from studying after graduating

3 - Jaggi, I agree with EF_Carol, your essay is written well, good job!!! However, I would like to share what I...

Writing FeedbackJaggi7921 - Jun 25, 2015
justivy03
Jun 25, 2015
The web let us have an easy access to the latest information and let us easily bond with each other.

3 - Shuyuan, I believe your new to EssayForum, a very warm WELCOME to the EF Family... Now, I'll make some contributions...

Writing Feedbackshuyuan51039 - Jun 24, 2015
justivy03
Jun 25, 2015
Living for today is better than living for tomorrow

6 - Hello my dear friends, I rewrite my essay please correction it. TOEFL essay I am ready to TOEFL examination, I need...

Writing FeedbackNaph - May 19, 2015
Naph
Jun 24, 2015
Is Consumerism a major problem for societies today?

2 - Niravv, I would like to take this opportunity to WELCOME you to EssayForum. You're yet another addition to the growing EF...

Writing Feedbackniravv - Jun 24, 2015
justivy03
Jun 24, 2015
Criminal habitual relapse. Cause and suggestions

4 - thanks for your evaluation. It is very helpful

Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 23, 2015
lacusclyne
Jun 24, 2015
"Time flies". So grab all the moments you can within the time. Indeed college years are the best.

6 - You wrote an excellent essay on college years! I think your basic structure is good. So is yourvocabulary and...

Writing Feedbacksally_922 - Jun 16, 2015
EF_Carol
Jun 24, 2015
Should government support local film makers financially?

4 - The movie industry->movie industry where these filmmakers-> where filmmakers. you have not mentions those filmmaker. Therefore, it is not quite right...

Writing Feedbackwei0531 - Jun 22, 2015
lacusclyne
Jun 23, 2015
"My Terrible Neighborhood" - Stating reasons and giving examples paragraph.

4 - Thank you justivy03 and lcturn87 for your meaningful feedback. I truly appreciate it.

Writing FeedbackChamsky - Jun 23, 2015
Chamsky
Jun 23, 2015
Write a paragraph to give advice for beginners of the English language ( About 140 words)

3 - - It's advisable that beginners of the English language should take the four following advicecritics. - FirstlyFirst, they should...

Writing Feedbackvtnmai - Jun 22, 2015
justivy03
Jun 23, 2015
Making handmade stuffs is my hobby - every girl should be clever with her hands

4 - A very nice paragraph about your work or is it a hobby? Just a couple of suggestions. I think...

Writing Feedbackvinvin - Jun 9, 2015
EF_Carol
Jun 23, 2015
Music and sports are not important in school

3 - There were some slight details that I wanted to assist you with changing. I organized the changes according to each paragraph...

Writing Feedbackqiyunyiyu - Jun 23, 2015
lcturn87
Jun 23, 2015
The students should do part-time job to look at how different the real world is.

4 - - FirstlyFirst, working would help students fill gaps in their knowledge, especially for practical knowledge which they may not acquire completely...

Writing Feedbackchuoi9 - Jun 21, 2015
justivy03
Jun 23, 2015
The idea of free universities - what is your opinion? The quality is even more important question.

5 - almost universities-> most universities in this relationship-> in this mutual relationship they need to make money to fund scholarship programs, educational...

Writing Feedbackchuoi9 - Jun 5, 2015
lacusclyne
Jun 23, 2015
Compare/Contrast Essay - Similarities and differences between Me and my Brother

5 - Congratulations Bluebabey!!! There's no greater joy for an editor like myself than to know that I was able to contribute...

Writing FeedbackBlueBabey - May 30, 2015
justivy03
Jun 23, 2015
Sending the first human to the moon - how it has affected mankind?

3 - i am grateful for your remarks. It is very helpful. Thanks

Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 22, 2015
lacusclyne
Jun 23, 2015
Do you think that universities should be available for all students and free?

3 - - University education is thecornerstone of development in all fields of life, medicine, engineering, sciences, and others. - To...

Writing FeedbackM19O09F11 - Jun 20, 2015
justivy03
Jun 22, 2015
Working in a child period may make more living comfort in the future due to gaining early experience

5 - what is subject verb agreement? what is my problem where you say "subject verb agreement)"? what is the correction of that...

Writing Feedbackkasra_Sa - Jun 22, 2015
kasra_Sa
Jun 22, 2015
Advertisement on USA summer camps jobs - write why you want work there.

3 - - Summer camps are regarded as significant activities to build children's skills and develop their abilities to create good generation ina...

Writing FeedbackM19O09F11 - Jun 17, 2015
justivy03
Jun 22, 2015
Family closeness is not so tight nowadays as it used to be in the past. The root cause of it is...

3 - Hello, (1) As you conclude your idea by emphasizing a comparison from the past, it means that you...

Writing FeedbackJaggi7921 - Jun 21, 2015
Anfalia
Jun 22, 2015
Should sports athletes be rewarded with high salary?

3 - Good jobs!!! But there're still some small mistakes. +Beingincapable participate in this industry => incapable of. You should be careful...

Writing Feedbackhan4 - Jun 21, 2015
cookie234
Jun 21, 2015
IELTS TASK 2 - the relations between nature and training abilities

3 - @MisterWandering: thanks your advice and I'll check my essay <3

Writing Feedbackriankia - Jun 19, 2015
riankia
Jun 21, 2015
Should companies and individual pay to clean up the environment in proportion to their actions?

3 - Hi Marned, Thanks for your comment. I'm trying to improve my writing, and have been reading a few books...

Writing Feedbackhan4 - Jun 20, 2015
han4
Jun 21, 2015
Distance between family members is extremely increasing nowadays.

3 - thanks for your recommendations. I will try to use them in my writing.

Writing Feedbackmarned - Jun 13, 2015
marned
Jun 21, 2015
University education helps get a better job or give more benefits for both individuals and society

4 - Your welcome, I don't think like you. I think you can write easily by keeping writing. Write more and more. I'm...

Writing Feedbackcookie234 - Jun 20, 2015
marned
Jun 21, 2015
Assignment: Is it important to question the ideas and decisions of people in positions of authority?

5 - You are using a very high level of vocabulary which makes the essay formal. I did some quick checks and here...

Writing FeedbackEric2750230 - Jun 8, 2015
thanhnguyen279
Jun 20, 2015
In my opinion, all general subjects should be all taught to students for several reasons.

3 - Thank you Eric2750230, I really appreciate it. I do not have much time now and have to review fast before the...

Writing Feedbackthanhnguyen279 - Jun 19, 2015
thanhnguyen279
Jun 20, 2015
This topic was supposed to be for Spotlighting a person in the community!

3 - @IcTurn87 THANKS SOOO MUCH!! This was one of my first essays that i had to do and i wasn't sure how...

Writing FeedbackMagic_Wizard - Jun 19, 2015
Magic_Wizard
Jun 19, 2015
The increasing number of the elderly people and its influence on society

4 - Hi you, I am a beginner. And below are my recommendations Paragraph 1: the overwhelming proportion of the old...

Writing Feedbackzen111 - Jun 18, 2015
chuoi9
Jun 19, 2015
The new Internet problems. Threat for the children and cyber crime - IELTS

4 - I also think your writing was very organized. You have good transitions. Well done! Here are some suggestions to improve:...

Writing Feedbackgundampro - Jun 16, 2015
lcturn87
Jun 18, 2015
Write a letter to this person for an English lesson [ielts writing]

4 - Your letter is well written, but needs some attention. You should break up the one long intro ,into three or four...

Writing Feedbackterrytu - May 25, 2015
EF_Carol
Jun 18, 2015
How to minimize the levels of stress in high school students?

6 - Lets talk about your conclusion! Take apart your concluding sentence, and then write a sentence, about each idea. take breaks...exercise...control...

Writing FeedbackKibaco15 - May 27, 2015
EF_Carol
Jun 18, 2015
IELTS Writing Task 2 - People get into debt for buying unnecessary things

6 - if I were you, I would like to write this : There is a predominant reason why people become so...

Writing FeedbackHettymsk - May 24, 2015
siddiqumar
Jun 18, 2015
We can not critique Internet as good or bad. It is a multifaceted problem.

3 - Some is famous for being criticized and belittled for posting unhealthy things on theInternet experts have also showed that using...

Writing Feedbackphoenix99 - Jun 16, 2015
M19O09F11
Jun 17, 2015
Maintaining body health and saving the world as a whole with eating no meat or fish

4 - Hello IqbalThemi, First, I do agree with justivy03 that you should rewrite your introductory paragraph. Second, this essay is clear. Good...

Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Jun 13, 2015
Anfalia
Jun 17, 2015
What people do with their rubbish and how a town tries to keep the area clean and attractive?

6 - Well not in the whole paragraph, just the first line. The words are not connected that well which later on was...

Writing FeedbackM19O09F11 - Jun 14, 2015
sally_922
Jun 16, 2015
Public transport for health keeping, pollution reducing and environment protection.

5 - Keep in mind where u use fullstop point becuase there is lot which are wrongly used. Next,use some complex sentence and...

Writing FeedbackM19O09F11 - Jun 14, 2015
Jaggi7921
Jun 16, 2015
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