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Most people believe that adult should provide all child demands, because they not are independent

5 - yup, Dumi right, make some sentences in the beginning of your essay to attract the reader's attention

Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Jul 23, 2014
fikri
08:21am
I believe that society has been helped by the invention of the Internet

6 - is it ielts essay? please include the type of essay beside the topic that you have written above.

Writing Feedbackpntncar - Jul 17, 2014
fikri
08:20am
Should people be allowed to have cosmetic surgery before the age of 18?

1 - what type of your essay? is it ielts, toefl, or another else? please give the type of essay, so the...

Writing Feedbackhwabatte - Yesterday
fikri
08:19am
Advantages and disadvantages of advertisement ?

3 - don't stop to always practice here, you will get more suggestion to make your essay better

Writing Feedbackemonabin - Yesterday
fikri
08:16am
task 2 for ielts: the wealth sharing among countries always have two sides

5 - Therefore, many people propose the sharing things such as: food and education form advanced countries to the poor ones...

Writing FeedbackTuti gunner - Jul 8, 2014
fikri
08:13am
IELTS: What are the benefits and problems brought by international corporation?

9 - When writing a conclusion for task 2, I always start with the words "In conclusion". There's no reason why you...

Writing Feedbacklynn11 - Jun 16, 2014
eddies
08:13am
IELTS - Effect of movies and computer games containing violence

7 - even this essay opens for discussion or both views, it is always nicer if you state your opinion in the...

Writing Feedbackmsarkar - Jul 22, 2014
eddies
08:11am
Ielts: Mobile phones facilitate our work and also simplify our lives

4 - it seems unbalanced, try to give more details in the second view

Writing Feedbackzizi1107 - Jun 21, 2014
fikri
08:11am
IELTS - Talent is one of the awesome things in the world

6 - grammar mistakes also, don't forget to put space between each paragraph to make the readers easier to catch...

Writing FeedbackFlower777 - Jun 30, 2014
fikri
08:09am
IELTS ESSAY; Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only

5 - it sems to me that you do not need to put this sentence in the end of your first...

Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Yesterday
fikri
08:07am
IELTS; Schools greatest failure is that it focuses too intensely on academic subjects

8 - this is the introduction that I've got from my teacher here,I've used it for along time and the result shows better...

Writing FeedbackSagar1004 - Jul 22, 2014
fikri
08:02am
TOEFL_The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Do you agree?

13 - Perhaps, this is not working for you and for some others. However, this goes into reserve for your examiner. I...

Writing FeedbackFor a voy - Jul 22, 2014
eddies
06:53am
IELTS: The pie charts indicate different percentages of expenditure on seven items

NEW - The pie charts indicate different percentages of expenditure on seven items in US from 1966 to 1996. It is obvious...

Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - 06:21am
Ielts - fast food is good or bad?

9 - read sample essays as many as possible as you will learn how ielts essay should written. Government and...

Writing FeedbackHelpmeet - Jun 6, 2014
eddies
03:26am
TOEFL -advices from senior people are more valuable than from people at our age

3 - This contains 501 words. Is the essay written in 30 minutes? direct quote might be acceptable. However, it is...

Writing Feedbackjamie3160003 - Jul 1, 2014
eddies
03:14am
The importance of utilizing advisement globally continues to increase each year

4 - this is always followed by plural noun After you Log on to EF, have a look at the new...

Writing Feedbackdondon26 - Jun 21, 2014
eddies
03:07am
Topic: Which better? Living in a city or living in the country? why (150 words)

1 - brings about many opportunities to develop and promote... of development and promotion is the number one option for people...

Writing FeedbackNamkeo - Yesterday
xizon7777
03:00am
IELTS 2- insufficient respect is shown to older people

3 - These are not a good grasp of colloquial language. Possible solution: Get some lessons for...

Writing Feedbackandial - Jun 30, 2014
eddies
02:56am
Spending more money in public transportation should be improved early

3 - Therefore, I would argue that governments should categorize issues by putting them in orders, and public transportation should be the...

Writing Feedbackpe5167 - Jun 20, 2014
eddies
02:22am
[TOEFL]People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful

3 - the criticism enables youpeople to be aware of others' opinion | other opinions. I prefer using the world people instead of...

Writing FeedbackCute Scott - Jun 20, 2014
eddies
02:18am
TOEFL - automobiles have changed our lives

4 - When writing a conclusion for task 2, I always start with the words "In conclusion". There's no reason why you...

Writing Feedbackshreyansh13 - Jun 27, 2014
eddies
02:03am
IELTS Task 2: permit of women to run career in army must be supported

4 - plural form numbers of armies | number armies this is too vague as an example. Always have journalistic questions...

Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jul 12, 2014
eddies
01:47am
IELTS Task 2. Less Homework Means Less Stress for Children

4 - one word is always better than two-three words. Many paired words affect the readability level When writing a...

Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jul 12, 2014
eddies
01:44am
IELTS Task 2. Where Talent Comes From

8 - have a look at the bold ones. I think you fail when using references. What they refer to? parents or...

Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jun 18, 2014
eddies
01:41am
Oil discovery has been most beneficial for people in Iran

5 - We are very grateful to an abundant oil supply given by the almighty. It effects the future nation prosperity generally...

Writing Feedbacksomi - Jul 2, 2014
SHanafi
12:33am
Extinction of some languages will make life easier through improving the efficiency and employment

7 - IELTS is a proficiency test. In other words, a test for accuracy. Even native speakers can't achieve 8 in all sub-tests....

Writing Feedbackkevin1983 - Jul 20, 2014
JethroJosh
Yesterday
4 types of landfill waste in Molovia, Bratistan, Atlantis, Senia and Vatania

6 - the .... est + noun followed by in/of/that, e.g the smallest category in this type. grammar problem....

Writing FeedbackHang Le - Jun 11, 2014
eddies
Yesterday
TOEFL: Technology has not made children less crative than they were in the past

3 - Write a concluding signal, like: In conclusion,... This is important to show that you will end your essay....

Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Yesterday
eddies
Yesterday
TOEFL: 'career preparation' - reasons why people attend to schools

5 - a subject and verb agreement. Write: These universities play | The university plays write: a library |...

Writing Feedbackbrisky - Jun 4, 2014
eddies
Yesterday
IELTS academic task one .. bar chart - coffee and meat consumption

4 - Make sure you have a clear intro and an overview, by writing them in different paragraphs. Compare and...

Writing Feedbackmo7ammed1986 - Jun 28, 2014
eddies
Yesterday
IELTS Writing Task 1: Life cycle of silkworm and production of silk cloth

4 - When describing a process diagram, most students have no problems describing the stages in the process step by step. However, not...

Writing Feedbackzoomikag - Jul 23, 2014
eddies
Yesterday
Most important characteristic of a good teacher?

2 - You better include the full prompt in your post for us to get a better understanding as to what it means...

Writing Feedbackashkannaghib - Yesterday
dumi
Yesterday
[TOEFL] people should do something that they do not enjoy doing . agree or disagree?

4 - It is not good to work in other pressure.Nobody can be happy when they follow other and go against their...

Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Yesterday
poudelmelina
Yesterday
Toefl essay: advertisements whose target is young children should be banned

7 - Nowadays, the advertisements in our daily life have become more and more various confusing, even some adults cannot recognize which...

Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 20, 2014
dumi
Yesterday
More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes.

4 - Yep,sure :)

Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 23, 2014
sundin928
Yesterday
Vehicle has enhanced people being. However, cars harm nature.

2 - First of all, there are few researches worry about influence transport on nature. They show that carbon...

Writing FeedbackHappyman - Jul 22, 2014
sundin928
Yesterday
'We should acknowledge and use most suitable methods of learning' - Books vs Experience?

2 - well, I changed it to: We can learn and gain knowledge with different methods, such as reading a book or...

Writing Feedbackhirt_01 - Jul 22, 2014
hirt_01
Jul 23, 2014
"I AM NOT A MERE TEACHER" - creative essay

2 - thanks for correcting me on the digressions. n a cat means continuous assessment test... it's quite common in my country

Writing Feedbackdchege711 - Jul 17, 2014
dchege711
Jul 23, 2014
IELTS: 'food, drink and tobacco' - statistic of expenditure graph

3 - actually i don't really understand what u mean by 'reporting tone' , could you please give me some examples? any,...

Writing Feedbackxizon7777 - Jul 22, 2014
xizon7777
Jul 23, 2014
IELTS Air travel is becoming more welcomed by common people since its price is going down

6 - Admittedly, the market price of flight tickets is normally high so that the majority people have to choose cheaper means to...

Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 21, 2014
dumi
Jul 23, 2014
Dramatic increase in fast food consuming

3 - What is the purpose of writing this essay? Is it for IELTS, TOEFL? Mention the purpose in the title itself so...

Writing FeedbackHaiha - Jul 12, 2014
dumi
Jul 23, 2014
"Another First Date" - my narrative essay

2 - ................ well, the latter part is not so clear to me :( ..... is this what you mean; If...

Writing FeedbackLuna2014 - Jul 9, 2014
dumi
Jul 23, 2014
IELTS writing 1: meat and poultry consumption

1 - The line graph compares presents the per capita consumption of different meat items, namely beef, pork, brollers broilers and turkey...

Writing FeedbackStarSea - Jul 23, 2014
dumi
Jul 23, 2014
IELTS: In which areas people made important progress?

5 - Today,the role of English as a global language is indispensable.Some people are of the point view that we can implement introduce...

Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 19, 2014
dumi
Jul 23, 2014
SAT - "happiness is not something that happens to us after we get what we want"

3 - Impressive start :) It seems to be something close at hand yet or sometimes far away...

Writing Feedbacklittleting - Jul 9, 2014
dumi
Jul 23, 2014
IELTS: Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable

5 - On the other hand, the development of technology may result in negative consequences on the environment and society.

Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 18, 2014
StarSea
Jul 23, 2014
[IELTS] 'Long-term positive effects of culture' - should tourist obey local customs and behaviors?

9 - thank you that's very kind :) Oh I see! Didn't think of "cultural diversity" before eventhough...

Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jul 18, 2014
SalMon
Jul 23, 2014
'Europe had degraded most of its land' - three regions of the world during 1990's

1 - First, you need to upload the charts in to the thread for us to provide you with more meaningful feedbacks. Without...

Writing Feedbackkashaf - Jul 22, 2014
dumi
Jul 22, 2014
IELTS: Effects of technology to communication - dangers for a society

9 - Thank you, dumi. I did this without making an outline. Is that the reason why that the body paragraphs are...

Writing Feedbackbmomongan - Jul 19, 2014
bmomongan
Jul 22, 2014
In order to avoid social crisis we should treat the elders with a courteous attitude

4 - hi guys ,your comments are really helpful to me,and i rewrite this essay. Welcome to modify :) There is...

Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 22, 2014
sundin928
Jul 22, 2014
IELTS Easy for poor people to get access to university education

5 - thanks dumi.

Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 21, 2014
sundin928
Jul 22, 2014
Fast food is cheap and convenient therefore has positive impact on human eating habits

5 - Equally importantly, cost for fast food is much lower than any other kind of food. In earlier times, conducting eating...

Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jul 17, 2014
Pahan
Jul 22, 2014
IELTS: Too much freedom for children affected their studies

3 - Secondly, another evidence shows that when children are given freedom to spend pocket money in which they may buy expensive toys,...

Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jul 21, 2014
Pahan
Jul 22, 2014
Toefl writing is my weakness, hope you can help me, the question is written in the message.

4 - ............ this is a very confusing sentence :( You need to rephrase this line as it does not convey...

Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 19, 2014
Pahan
Jul 22, 2014
IELTS : Everyone possess a talent - we should recognize it and improve

5 - To begin with, it is, in general, it is said that only some people are genius whereas others are not. Obviously,...

Writing Feedbackxizon7777 - Jul 22, 2014
Pahan
Jul 22, 2014
TOEFL essay, living in big cities or living in small towns; the Article

4 - Another thing that put big cities in front of small towns is the facilitates facilities and services it contains...

Writing FeedbackBasilMostafa - Jul 18, 2014
Pahan
Jul 22, 2014
Writing task 2: studying overseas can be difficult at first, but gaining experience make it worth it

7 - Your prompt is directly asking you about the opinion you hold on this issue. So, it is better to be...

Writing FeedbackTranAnh - Jul 18, 2014
dumi
Jul 22, 2014
IELTS: spending more money on promoting healthy lifestyle or treatment

3 - I don't see much meaning in this sentence. Your argument is not so convincing. :( I think you...

Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 19, 2014
dumi
Jul 22, 2014
Long period of studying will make students feel bored and limit their self-study

4 - Thank you very much,I will try.

Writing Feedbackwulishiyanzl - Jul 7, 2014
wulishiyanzl
Jul 22, 2014
IELTS: bar chart - average retirement age among seven countries in 2004 and 2008

5 - This is what I suggest for your introduction; The two bar charts present the details of average retirement age of...

Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 18, 2014
dumi
Jul 22, 2014
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