Why I chose to apply to UCF
UCF is a school I have been drawn to for many years of my life. There are numerous reasons why I chose to apply. UCF has a well-established Nursing program and is very well-known..
At UCF, I plan to study at the College of Nursing. UCF's College of Nursing, educating nurses since 1979, consists of modern classrooms and teaching laboratories. It also receives one of the highest percentages of funding for research than most other universities in Florida. According to Medical News Today, the Commission on Collegiate Nursing Education has accredited UCF's College of Nursing for 10 years, starting in 2007. This 10-year accreditation shows that UCF has an excellent nursing program, solid curriculum, and outstanding faculty and staff. Since the College of Medicine was recently established at UCF, the two colleges could benefit from each other tremendously. The College of Nursing will be enhanced by joining with medical education research. The benefits from the new College of Medicine will help me better comprehend nursing. I feel that the College of Nursing at UCF is the best nursing program to obtain a degree in nursing.
UCF is a very good and well-known University. UCF is nationally known for many of its aspects, such as sports, academics, activities and has been rated a top public University in the United States. Back when UCF was called FTU, my father was a student. He was the engineering senator in student government. As he had a great experience, I hope I will have the pleasure to also.
This would be tighter and more interesting if you start it with your second paragraph. You don't need the first three sentences at all.
I feel that the College of Nursing at UCF is the best nursing program at which to obtain a degree in nursing.
UCF is a very good and well-known University.UCF is nationally known for many of its aspects, such as sports, academics, activities and has been rated a top public University in the United States....This sentence would be so much better if you inserted some specific things, for example, WHAT activities?
As he had a great experience there at .... , I hope I will have the pleasure to also.
I like all of the facts that you included in your essay!
I would probably say a few more things about the other aspects of the college, maybe your favorite extracurricular activity?
Thanks, PatelJ. I notice you have been helping a lot of people lately.
