wasn't the way I imagine
was not the way I imagined. (Get rid of contractions.)
Everyday brought something new
something new of what? Although you might mention it later, its confusing when someone reads it for the first time.
after all the staining I have done, the lab nicknamed me the peripherin queen.
after all the staining I had done, my lab jokingly nicknamed me the 'Peripherin Queen'
There are many times when I feel stupid at the lab. When the professors and students use vocabulary that I don't understand, I become confused.
There were many situations where I felt unintellectual at the lab. Sometimes, the professors and the students would communicate through vocabulary.
Determined to find the answers to my questions
Determined to understand the biology-speak, as I called it, I
Honestly? I think this topic is a little banal. I don't know what you did that was so intellectually stimulating. Maybe you found out something completely new at the lab. Right now, I think your lack of vocabulary caused you to reread the biology textbook, which you should have done in the first place before going to work at a lab. So its really confusing but you have a perfect place to talk about what you find intellectually stimulating. I would follow up on the staining nerves idea. Can you apply staining nerves to any component of daily life.. that will be pretty interesting.Can you edit my nyu supplements.