Some people have a natural ability to lead. I'm definitely not one of those people. W
hahahhah nice job! The admissions office reader probably sees so many essays about "I am a natural leader" that it is refreshing to see one like this.
Murtaza is correct about Not. Another option is to do this:
I acted this way not because I couldn't do the work but because I was uncomfortable working with people.
Grant, I think most of this should be revised. Put it in this form:
Discuss academic achievements
Discuss interests
Discuss experiences
Do this in three brief paragraphs.