A campus recruiter casually handed me a pamphlet and a book of stories of returned volunteers after talking briefly about the gist of what service entails I left inquisitive but not convinced that this could be a path for my life.
... take that part into a new sentence.
A few days later I picked up and read the stories of the returned volunteers and came to realize that many of my experiences from volunteer work and healthcare had similar if not
with identical roots.
I think this is well written. You have very strong sentences;
Through teaching medical terminology to refugees I have worked closely with many different cultures and found a shared common pulse running deep in many people from many parts of the world, this is a passion for living life all the way. I feel this pulse runs deep and strong in all parts of the world and lends its hand to small and large victories throughout days or lifetimes.
... very impressive :)
Wish you good luck!