moealrob 3 / 13 Dec 31, 2010 #1It's not an easy thing moving and living in another country, your life as you know it changes. It can be a hard dillemma and was exactly what I had to face. I was obligated to go but it was farther better. Not only I had to change high school once but rather three times. Twice in the U.S since I came here June this year and once, I consider the most challenging, from Jordan to the United States. When entering a school I didn't know anyone, and there was a big cultural and language gap that separated me from the rest of the students. In Jordan all classes were in Arabic, accept English,. Change was Indeed a hardship I had to face, and was something I had trouble with, but I eventually fought this change until I felt was at home. All the way from Jordan I have moved where I experienced a very pivotal experience that gave giving me an identity of who I really am, where I came from, and all about my familyI would like to check yours too.
helloworld1 3 / 12 Dec 31, 2010 #2i think there is much more room to elaborate on the 'cultural and language gap'. and most importantly elaborate on how it has changed you, how u deat with it, and maybe link it to your future plans.The yale supplement is supposed to reach 400 words if i'm not wrong..Could you take a look at my 150word essay? thanks(: