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'As a mother in home' - The Person I Admire Most


Farinaz 1 / 2  
Nov 9, 2011   #1
We value and admire some people such as parents, teachers, friends, professors and movie stars who influence our life for their special characteristics. For me, my mom is the person I admire most. In every aspect of my life she played an important role not only as a mother but also as a good friend and teacher.

As a mother in home , I have always admired her kindness , unconditional love and patience. She has supported us in whatever we involved in. she kindly and patiently cares of family and never upsets about our mistakes.

As a teacher she taught me unique lessons. I learnt from her to respect and love others without considering their social ranks. For example when sweeper cleans up our alley my mom thanks him and gives him a cup of tea or breakfast. In addition, I learned from her how to act confidently in critical situations.

Against our gap generation, she has always been a good friend for me. I have a deep attachment with her so that I share all of my stories and feelings with her. There is no any secret that she does not know about me. So we were good friends. For instance, she knows all of my friends or she knows which of my professors I like most.

These above mentioned properties has made my mom so special for me . She does not have much education, but in my view she is far more knowledgeable than a teacher in my life.
Cecile 3 / 5  
Nov 9, 2011   #2
*as a mother at home
*add "and" after unconditional love and patience
try to find other words for admire in the beggining so that it doesn't sound repetitive
Also just read through your essay because there are small grammer errors you can fix
Also add more examples to what else your mom has taught you (unless if there is a word limit)
Good luck!


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