but the most influential person to me out of all of them is my mom.
but the one who influences me the most is my mum.
My mom has earned this right because I feel that she is the picture you see, when you think of a strong independent woman
...because she reflects the picture of a strong and independent woman.
Her strength comes from within and you can tell when you when you talk to her, not to mention when you hear what she has done.
Her strength comes from the fire within her, acquired by all the hardships she has faced.
The reason I look at her and see is strength is the fact
The reason I admire her strength is the fact...
My mom is an example of in dependence in how she was able to be a single mother of three and still maintained a great life with little help.
You have already mentioned independence.
You can rather say: She is an example of a great mother who has reared three children on her own, and who has yet lived a good life with the help of few.
She has taught me by working hard and keeping yourself focused anything, is possible.
She made me understand the quote 'When there is a will, there is a way', and this surely did make a difference to me. I always focus on whatever I want to excel.
I admire my mother for the compassion she is able to give to others.
I admire her for the compassion she has to others.
The way she can take her experiences and apply them to help other shows how she cares.
The way she relates her experiences and her perception on others' problems, she is able to help them, thus showing her carefulness.
and helped guide her to get out of that relationship.
...advised her and brought her back on the right track.
All of these characteristics from my mom have shaped me and made me the person I am today and that is why I look at my mom as the most influential person in my life.
My mum's qualities have contributed towards my well upbringing and whenever I call her 'mum', I feel proud for the great person she is and made me become.
You have used 'mom' too many times.