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Live a life that is pleasing to my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ, FSU essay


beccaboo3290 2 / 5  
Oct 8, 2008   #1
For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.

To me, the Latin word Vires is quite complex. True strength exists in many forms, including moral strength, intellectual strength, and physical strength. Each of these three individual strengths are very important, and together they form one very powerful word that is symbolic of many ideas.

Moral strength is significant in my life because I believe it is foundational to who I am and how other people view me. I am involved with people of all ages, and many look up to me and ask me for guidance. People know they can trust me and that I will not make hasty decisions based on whim or emotions. By living a life that exemplifies moral strength, I reveal my true character as one who is respectful and well-respected. Also, I am a Christian and a firm believer in Jesus Christ. Vires, as interpreted in a moral sense, is honoring to God and living in a way that is pleasing to Him. As I want to serve God with my life, setting a good godly example for others to follow means setting high moral standards.

The next aspect of strength that is important to me is that of intellect. I have been blessed with a mind capable of learning and understanding a great deal of things. I have a thirst for knowledge and strive to learn and discover new things. When given the opportunity to challenge myself or view life from a different perspective, I seize the opportunity. I believe in always appreciating every aspect of life, and never taking things for granted. Knowledge, wisdom, and understanding are absolutely priceless to me, and I strive to explore that which was previously unknown to me in order to advance and further expand my mind. The idea of college and a whole new level of learning excites me. I have a very powerful determination and drive, and when I set out to learn something new, much can be accomplished. I believe Florida State University is the best place to further broaden my mind and equip me for the future. One of my favorite quotes is that of Oliver Wendell Holmes, which states that a mind that is stretched by a new experience can never go back to its old dimensions.

The last type of strength that I hold in high regard is physical strength. Although I am not very muscular or an Olympic athlete, I still believe in taking care of my body, and I work hard to strengthen it a little each day. Over the years, I have played on many different school sports teams; my favorite was volleyball. It was unique in that readiness for this sport involved rigorous training and conditioning. To be able to hit the ball at any given moment in any circumstance requires a great level of discipline, endurance and intense willpower. Achieving goals are important as their successes are what motivate me to move forward and push myself to be all that I can be. Also, physical strength promotes living a healthy life and that will in turn lead to a happier life.

In conclusion, all three of these forms of strength tipify my life and who I am. Each type of strength coincides with the other; they all complement each other, and without each of these, a portion of the beauty and meaning is lost. I want to live a life that is pleasing to my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ, and one of the best ways is by applying Vires to every area of my own life.
OP beccaboo3290 2 / 5  
Oct 9, 2008   #2
Dear Gloria (may I call you by your first name?),
The reason I did not write about the other two is because the prompt said to "describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life."

I figured that writing about Vires only would be better for me so that I could focus on it and explain it fully. If I had written about each one of these Latin words, I don't think I would have been able to do them justice given the amount of words allowed to be submitted. Do you think this essay is good enough to be submitted as is? Is there anything that you think I should omit?
EF_Team5 - / 1,586  
Oct 9, 2008   #3
Good evening.

Thanks for the clarification, I understand better now. I think it's excellent as it is, and I wouldn't cut anything out :)

Good work.

Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com
pilla2008 /  
Oct 10, 2008   #5
wow like your essay a lot good ideas, nice flow good luck


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