18 months Home stay program
months can be a plural noun here.
Write 'my 18-month homestay program'
cooking,having dinner together, and playing with children.
Faulty Parallelism> Write ' cooking'..., ' having'..., and 'playing'...,
I evenhave learned the Japanese language and became able to handled a conversation inwith Japanese.
Pay particular attention to tense use
to makeforge new friendships
Write 'forge', instead make. Make is too common to describe something.
Hope this helps :D