I am more of an introvert than an extrovert; never truly express myself in any way. I have friends, but I rarely engage myself into their conversations, unless their spoken words were directed towards me. I preferred listening to their conversations, because I was afraid, afraid that mistakes would slip off my tongue as I spoke. To be plain, I was not confident in myself.
There's some tense problems just, they don't all agree. For example, "I have friends, but I rarely engage myself into their conversations, unless their spoken words were directed towards me" You say you have friends (present tense) and you rarely engage yourself in their conversations (present tense) unless their words were directed at you (past tense).
summer past by fast
past should be passed
The bell rang,indicated indicating that[quote=Ashley5789] my friends who I befriended the previous year greeted me.
it was lunchtime.[/quote]
'My friends who I befriended' seems kind of repetitive... maybe 'My friends who I had met' instead
We stood in the lunch line andthey started to talk about their summer experiences,
(just to clear up who was doing the talking)
with the fully (repetitive with packed) packed cafeteria, we have had no choice but to sit separately.
I found myself a seat beside a dark -haired, olive skinned girl. I was about to shove food into my mouth (sounds kind of harsh,maybe 'I was about to devour my food' instead?) but was interrupted by the girl beside me
I have had no choice but to talk to her since there was no other person nobody else with us
but I was scared, scared of errors in my words.
She said the best way to avoid errors was to have confident confidence, and to learn from those mistakes.
Also, I realized that the only important thing is to learn from past mistakes, and do to not be afraid to express oneself myself.
Hope this helped a bit!