Hey you!
Though some feel that keeping track of the small things clutters life, I disagree wholeheartedly.
While some may argue that*...
I am someone who gets a kick out of my frequent nature walks or visits to antique stores. I go analogy crazy.
I like that word -kick. However, what does analogy crazy have to do with the prev. sentence? o yea, another thing, why mention yourself as someone who? why not, I get a kick out of*...?
I am also the petite, lion-maned Asian that carries an SLR camera glued around my neck as I stop ever so often snap a picture of literally everything.
nice imagery
Though I have a special place in my heart for the small things, my heart pulsates for my bigger dreams, whether it is traveling the world to continue showcasing nature's beauty through working for National Geographic, working under the Korean government to alleviate suicide and alcoholism rates, designing websites for humanitarian non-profits probono, or empowering youth as a teacher or pastor.
WOAH~ quite a mouthful. maybe break these into smaller ideas? or if you want to keep them, it a tad too long... heart and heart =
[<3] heart squared xD
try not to use hopefully? I've tried using it too, but it sounds rather off.
You keeo going, you move from one painting to antiques to paws to antiques to camera-girl to career to a BIG picture. maybe a short thing about paintings, an intro about your "voice/self-identity" you talk much about self-expression, so I guess that's covered. yes you do show the richness of your life, but maybe organize those riches better? (hint: more paragraphs/break the one you have into smaller ones)