nolifer 2 / 1 Nov 20, 2012 #1Please be brutal. I also need help cutting it down to 300 characters. Thank you so much(:During my internship at USC's Stem Cell Core, I was exposed to protein biosynthesis and various interactions between different DNA/RNA molecules. It was maddening yet compelling about how many biomolecular factors contributed to regulating pluripotency. The comprehension of pluripotency was a wanton enigma waiting to be unraveled. As I leave for college, I have no intention of discontinuing my quest to solve this puzzle. 361 characters
blquandt 9 / 23 Nov 23, 2012 #2"It was maddening yet compelling about how many biomolecular factors contributed to regulating pluripotency. "Change to:"The amount of biomolecular factors that regulated pluripotency was maddening, yet fascinating. ""The comprehension of pluripotency was a wanton enigma waiting to be unraveled. "Change to:"The secrets of pluripotency are a puzzle waiting to be solved. "You can use some other word instead of "secrets" or another analogy instead of "a puzzle waiting to be solved" if you want.Also, replace "discontinuing" with "ending".