UC Prompt #2: "struggled with obesity"
Undergraduateshaq896 - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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My personal point of view on animal cruelty and abuse
Undergraduatecoalerz - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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Commapp Essay (Experience)
UndergraduateLyra - Oct 6, 2009 / Lyra - Oct 9, 2009
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How can i make my fsu essay more WOW-ing?
UndergraduateBr00ke - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 9, 2009
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Application statement engineer (avionics)
UndergraduateCrappy - Oct 5, 2009 / Crappy - Oct 9, 2009
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'too much negativity' - Can someone look over my UT admissions essays? (I know they're cliche)
UndergraduateParthMirani - Oct 8, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 9, 2009
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Wearing my favorite Abercrombie shirt/ App: Experience
Undergraduatemarcabundo - Oct 8, 2009 / hera246 - Oct 9, 2009
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FAMU NURSING Admission essay! LOOK OVER IT to make it perfect
UndergraduateFaith8_88 - Oct 7, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
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my motivations and aspirations for going to NJCU essay
Undergraduatejt213 - Oct 8, 2009 / qudos - Oct 8, 2009
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U of Michigan- LSA Essay
UndergraduateDJBruce - Sep 29, 2009 / Jeanine - Oct 8, 2009
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"make a business successful" - UC Personal Statement!
UndergraduateOliverInsixieng - Oct 7, 2009 / OliverInsixieng - Oct 8, 2009
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Common App - Biotechnology and Agriculture
Undergraduatebam1992 - Oct 6, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 8, 2009
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The Latin word "Mores" figuratively represents the glue that holds me together
UndergraduateTheMig - Oct 6, 2009 / TheMig - Oct 7, 2009
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tulane essay, rough and needs critique!
Undergraduatetaytortot1209 - Oct 6, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 7, 2009
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UPenn: Page 217 of Autobiography starts with an incomplete sentence
Undergraduatemarcabundo - Oct 7, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 7, 2009
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"track and cross country" - another fsu Vires, Artes, Mores essay
Undergraduatethebluehippo - Oct 7, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 7, 2009
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Essays about meaningful life experience and family influence - FAMU admission
UndergraduateSxmBeauty - Oct 7, 2009 / marcabundo - Oct 7, 2009
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Kumdo Tournament - 'final, tiebreaking point' - a personal contribution or experience
Undergraduatexxgraceanxx - Oct 7, 2009 / SxmBeauty - Oct 7, 2009
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Common Application Essay - Holden Caulfield
UndergraduateBoNyKiD07 - Oct 4, 2009 / BoNyKiD07 - Oct 7, 2009
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'accidental discovery of Boston Univ. was through a popular college guide' - BU
Undergraduatevickaay - Oct 7, 2009 / coalerz - Oct 7, 2009
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'made $20,000 through various websites' - Common App Essay for top Universities
Undergraduatetheicfire - Oct 6, 2009 / blacks - Oct 7, 2009
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'I thought about my Grandma' - My Big Setback- University of Michigan Essay
Undergraduatedanderson2692 - Oct 4, 2009 / danderson2692 - Oct 7, 2009
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Admission Essay question, usage of "Vires, Artes, Mores"
UndergraduateVolleygirl - Aug 3, 2008 / starfish13 - Oct 7, 2009
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'Thousands miles from Tianjin, China' - UMich diversity
Undergraduateshaokunkaren - Oct 7, 2009 / shaokunkaren - Oct 7, 2009
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Anime (My essay to u-m)
UndergraduateSephiroth - Sep 24, 2009 / Sephiroth - Oct 7, 2009
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'training was overwhelming' - Common App a significant experience and its impact
Undergraduateblacks - Oct 6, 2009 / theicfire - Oct 6, 2009
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'A minor electrical problem' - UCF Obstacle/Bump in the Road Essay
UndergraduateCarrieC92 - Oct 6, 2009 / TheMig - Oct 6, 2009
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"My most profound interests; the universe" - UIUC Essay (#1 of 2)
Undergraduateagm - Aug 11, 2009 / agm - Oct 6, 2009
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'Youth pastor' - UF Essay - meaningful event/experience
Undergraduatempatt02 - Oct 5, 2009 / mpatt02 - Oct 6, 2009
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"find fulfillment in helping others" Looking for critiques on UC admission essay
UndergraduateKTT - Sep 30, 2009 / SeeHerFly - Oct 6, 2009
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'The Backyard Baseball League' - Common Application Personal Essay- Wiffleball
Undergraduatecchstroy - Oct 5, 2009 / cchstroy - Oct 6, 2009
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"some people are meant to go to college" - Undergraduate Admissions essay
Undergraduatelilboo2 - Oct 6, 2009 / bam1992 - Oct 6, 2009
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"That is intellectual exhaustion." - Stanford Short Essay: Intellectual Vitality
UndergraduateTimMill - Sep 30, 2009 / TimMill - Oct 6, 2009
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Is it OK to point out that you are not a good student because of other pursuits?
UndergraduateMalibuSky - Oct 6, 2009 / EF_Stephen - Oct 6, 2009
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There are two things that I love about life - UMD essays
Undergraduaterbtla - Oct 5, 2009 / rbtla - Oct 6, 2009
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"How would you describe yourself?" - Penn State Admission Essay
Undergraduatebritmin - Sep 22, 2009 / britmin - Oct 6, 2009
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I remember the day when my interest in computers began; PS Computer Science transfer
Undergraduateveronicak5678 - Oct 5, 2009 / veronicak5678 - Oct 6, 2009
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'visit to Victoria hospital' - ucas medical personal statement
Undergraduatel3goals12 - Oct 5, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 6, 2009
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'A new electrical plug' - UIUC Essays (Academic Interests/Activity)
Undergraduateqyuiosilent - Oct 5, 2009 / qyuiosilent - Oct 6, 2009
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'the best of my life weeks' - Common App Essay (Evaluate a Significant Experience)
UndergraduateSome1 - Oct 5, 2009 / mina_sedaghatir - Oct 5, 2009
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My house is a farm (UF college admission essay)
UndergraduateKlaa5 - Oct 4, 2009 / Klaa5 - Oct 5, 2009
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'Real people' - UT at Austin topic essay A. Important person
Undergraduatezbennett10 - Sep 29, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 5, 2009
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"the death of my beloved grandmother" - UCF Essay - Bump in the road
UndergraduateBrandonArnet - Sep 28, 2009 / alexabishop - Oct 5, 2009
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UCF Undergrad Essay on obstacle--how is my essay?
Undergraduatepianogirl246 - Sep 20, 2009 / alexabishop - Oct 5, 2009
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Common App - Influential Person (My teacher and the Humanities
UndergraduateJulietTheSpooky - Sep 17, 2009 / queela09 - Oct 5, 2009
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UCF personal obstacle; Life was good, money wasn't ever a problem
Undergraduatescaremechelle - Oct 5, 2009 / rhutch - Oct 5, 2009
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I find math amazing - UCAS mathematics personal statement
Undergraduateacelight - Oct 5, 2009 / l3goals12 - Oct 5, 2009
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My Florida State essay, my acheivements
Undergraduatepommell1 - Oct 5, 2009 / l3goals12 - Oct 5, 2009
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He played the violin; The sound of music
Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Oct 4, 2009 / pcvrz34g - Oct 5, 2009
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The pub, in which I bus tables at, named PJ Whelihans-Part Time Job/COMMON APP
UndergraduateWoolachee - Oct 4, 2009 / EF_Sean - Oct 5, 2009
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Essay for Penn - page 217 of your 300 page autobiography
UndergraduateMoog - Sep 28, 2009 / samcguff - Oct 4, 2009
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'Moving to Texas' - achievement, risk or ethical
Undergraduatejohnny2by4 - Oct 4, 2009 / johnny2by4 - Oct 4, 2009
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'Sharing something in common' - Lehigh University Essay : Equity and Community
Undergraduatebob92 - Oct 4, 2009 / bob92 - Oct 4, 2009
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"Brett, you're so fat." "Lose some weight!" - Experience; Common App
Undergraduatebam1992 - Oct 4, 2009 / verily - Oct 4, 2009
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My world-- UC personal statement
Undergraduatealalaprincess - Oct 4, 2009 / alalaprincess - Oct 4, 2009
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A Mother's Influence (Common App Essay)
Undergraduatecsmith11 - Oct 4, 2009 / vlatski - Oct 4, 2009
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What I would pay for peace
Undergraduatevlatski - Oct 4, 2009 / csmith11 - Oct 4, 2009
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""You what? You lived in China!" - Common App Essay. is this good enough?
Undergraduatecatherineb - Sep 20, 2009 / acat6332 - Oct 4, 2009
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'Acting like an adult' - Florida A meaningful experience..
Undergraduatekma721 - Sep 13, 2009 / Lorena21 - Oct 4, 2009
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"self-confidence in the hospital" - University of Florida Essay
UndergraduateJayp91 - Sep 27, 2009 / Lorena21 - Oct 4, 2009
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