WATCHING GLEE; UVA / Like, but pretend I dont

"Dude, I can't believe you are watching Glee," I would say to my little brother. Then I would continue peeking at the TV to finish listening to their song. To be completely honest, I fell in love with their music when I first heard it. My iPod is secretly full of Glee Cast song. I love their take on mix of a capella and instrumentals. I was ecstatic when my show choir decided to perform the Glee Cast version of "Don't Stop Believing," and was even more excited when my choir director gave me the male lead. So why do I pretend I don't like Glee? When I first watched Glee with my brother, there was just something about the show - the absurd representation of high school, or maybe even the gay (literally) drama - that the 'man' side of me raised the flag against. So I announced that the show was not worth my time, and turned my back. I wish I hadn't, but I can't go back on my word. I know it sounds ridiculous, but if I started watching the show now, my credibility as a big brother would be hopelessly lost. I can't risk losing the respect from my brother. So for now, I resort to downloading their music from iTunes and secretly watching short clips of their songs on Youtube.

couple of hours left. WHat do you guys think

i like it in general but it has a weird taste of homophobia somewhere, maybe tone it down a tad. could you check out mine?

Nice. One good thing about you essay is that its interesting. I can't say that about 80% of the essays on here.

Anyways the only comment or edit I would make would be replacing " I was ecstatic " with some other word. Ecstatic sounds thesaurusy & kind of forced.