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"Dill mill Gayya" - Why i want to be a nurse


faraaa80 1 / -  
Jan 22, 2013   #1
I always wanted to do a profession where I can helps people with any kind of problems. When I was young, I wanted to become a doctor because it is the center profession of the heath science. The idea of becoming a doctor was due of an Indian serial, Dill mill Gayya. Through this serial, the actors who play the doctor role were awesome. When the patients recover after their health or physical problems, the doctor feel good like it was a war that his team win, a beautiful feeling. Doctor was the main idea in my mind, but throughout pre-teen till now I realize a lot of things. I love challenges and bringing comfort to people throughout their difficult situation. By readings the explanation about different health science profession, nursing grabbed my attention. Firstly, this profession takes lots of energy to help people emotionally by giving them a lot of attention, which is interminable. The word '' interminable'' itself is a challenges which is excited for me. Secondly, a nurse spends more time with patients than a doctor usually does. Indeed, nurses are the caring persons who have mentally the biggest challenges. Thirdly, this profession will give me lots of things like opportunities for knowledge about health and also skills for taking care of people well. This profession is wonderful, because it's not only in hospital that I can help people but outside too, especially my own family. During my whole life, I never desire to realize something much than this decision, becoming a nurse. I'm completely ready to affront all challenges mentally and physically for this dream.
cskillman 2 / 6  
Jan 22, 2013   #2
This sounds good so far but you should pick one specific reason you want to be a nurse and really elaborate on that. Also a few minor grammatical errors but other than that good stuff!
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jan 23, 2013   #3
I always wanted to do a profession where I can helpshelp people with any kind of problems.

I always looked forward to a profession by which I can help people in need.

When I was young, I wanted to become a doctor because it is the center profession of the heath science.

As a child, I dreamed of becoming a doctor because that is the profession with the highest regard in Health Sector.

The idea of becoming a doctor was due of an Indian serial, Dill mill Gayya.. Through this serial, the actors who play the doctor role were awesome.

Dill mill Gayya, the Indian TV series is the one that inspired this desire of mine. Those actors did an awesome job with their doctor roles in the series.


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