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They that wait upon the Lord shall renew their streng - FSU essay help


Cydiona 2 / 2  
Oct 12, 2008   #1
For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.

"They that wait upon the Lord shall renew their strength; they shall mount up their wings as eagles; they shall run, and not be weary; and they shall walk, and not faint." - Bible, Isaiah 40:31. Never have I been ashamed to say that I continuously depend on God, from which all of my health and strength comes from. Not only that, but I am well aware that if it was not for the Lord and his sweet grace, I would not be here today enraptured in the many blessings He has bestowed upon me. I realize that every breath is a gift from God that should not be expected nor demanded but received out of appreciation and gratitude. It is my duty as a young, black, Christian, female to set the par for others, and to be a leading example to those who are lost in the world, looking for a way, but also to show 3-dimensional strength. I believe that my life completely embodies the definition of vires in its intellectual, moral and physical aspects. Not only is this strength of all kinds part of Florida Sate University's guiding philosophy but it is part of the philosophy which I choose to uplift and value in all aspects of my life. It is not that I believe that vires describes me but better yet, that I define the word vires.

"A woman with a voice is by definition a strong woman. But the search to find that voice can be remarkably difficult. It's complicated by the fact that in most nations, women receive substantially less education than men" -Melinda Gates. Living in this world is becoming increasingly challenging. As the amount of job and education opportunities decreases, the cost of living increases. Violence, corruption, and moral deterioration surround our everyday lives and occur in various situations daily. With the depletion of our economy and the encompassing of moral decay it takes Vires to overcome and strive for success day after day. Aside from that, the temptation to conform presents itself to my life constantly. Not a day goes by without a temptation being placed upon my moral strength to give in to the ideas and actions of this world and its dismay. As Melinda Gates states, the road to finding that voice of strength and sound foundation is not easy, but I'm more than willing to endure and achieve it. Many would say that I have two strikes against me because I am black and a female, but I look at my circumstance as a challenge. It is a challenge to rise above, regardless of the labels that have been placed upon me and to succeed just as anyone else. I close with this quote, from one of my greatest sources of inspiration and a woman whom I look up to greatly. "It doesn't matter who you are, where you come from. The ability to triumph begins with you always"-Oprah Winfrey. I will not only continue my desire to be hungry for knowledge and success but strive to learn, experience and conquer always, letting nothing cause my strength to become broken.
EF_Team5 - / 1,586  
Oct 12, 2008   #2
Good evening.

While both of these passages are very well articulated and organized, I don't see how they answer the prompt. Make sure that you adequately link your responses to the prompts because if the responses are not clear many admissions boards will not consider them.

Regards,
Gloria
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OP Cydiona 2 / 2  
Oct 12, 2008   #3
ok thank you, well i was responding soley to the moral and intellectual aspects of vires but maybe i should elaborate?
EF_Team5 - / 1,586  
Oct 13, 2008   #4
Yes; elaboration and specifics will save these essays, because as they are here they are still a bit vague. Link the characteristics to your quotes early on, rather than waiting until the end to do so; that will make a big improvement.

Regards,
Gloria
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